Most helpful critical review
17 of 20 people found the following review helpful
I don't understand how anyone got through this book
on January 17, 2012
The first thing I will say is try a preview of this book (if it is not still free) and see if you like the writing. I absolutely did not, and I knew it in a few pages.
I was really looking forward to reading this book. I found this while reading a different book, and it was killing me to wait to read it.
What a huge disappointment. I made it through 9% of my book. It was incredibly wordy and cliched.
In that time I learned who was behind the terrorism. Please - suspenseful.
This book was incredibly hard to read, the writing is horrible, it might be a 7th -8th grade level, and everything felt like a caricature.(it felt like a kid wrote it then went through with a thesaurus and changed words) Agent Snapshot, please - everyone else was called by a name, but they referred to Jaclyn as Agent Snapshot, and I am supposed to take her seriously?
Maybe the book got better, but I had better things to do with my time than wait for it.
If you are looking for an awesome kick butt heroine may I suggest the Kate Daniels series by Ilona Andrews. I also like the Secret McQueen by Sierra Dean. Under Wraps by Hannah Jayne. Iris Johansen the Ugly Duckling book was great.
I really really wanted to find a great new series, the best thing about this was that it was free, so I did not waste money.