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5 of 5 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
Whatever Gets You Through the Night, July 16, 2003
This review is from: Monstrosity (Mass Market Paperback)
The premise for Edward Lees book Monstrosity is filled with promise. Lee begins his book with an archeological dig of a Ponoye Indian site. What is found within the dig is gruesome and bids the reader wonder what happened all those years ago. Also, could such a thing happen again? Lee then switches to the storys main character, and the reader is introduced to Clare Prentiss, a homeless woman totally down on her luck. Clare used to have a promising military career, but she was setup within the machinations of a sex scandal. Enter a man who simply introduces himself as Dellin with a lucrative job offera totally too-good-to-be-true job offer. Meanwhile, people are mysteriously dying in macabre fashion. For example, Caleb stared right back at herCalebs severed head, that is. The head had been dropped in the area of leafy space between Kari Anns spread legs. Lee weaves a tapestry between the mystery of the archeological dig and the present day murders. Clare Prentiss finds herself mired in a gruesome mystery heavy with sexual overtones. Unfortunately, the conclusion of Monstrosity seems quite contrived and fails to meet its original premise of greatness. Instead, the book seems to run out of steam and takes on an assembly line approach to literary creation. The books outcome is predictable and disappointing. Monstrosity is an okay read, but there are far better horror and suspense books available for a discerning reader.
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9 of 11 people found the following review helpful:
1.0 out of 5 stars
13 reasons I hated this novel, April 8, 2004
This review is from: Monstrosity (Mass Market Paperback)
1) The cover is misleading. 2)The archeological story thread has little to do with the rest of the story. 3) The chronology of the story threads is awkward, at best. 4) A clunky lead weight of a sentence like this: "She preferred to think of herself, instead, as a passionate woman who pursued her physical desires in a feminine natural way, not a societal urchin hopelessly addicted to variant amphetamines and subsequently given to rampant sexual excess due to a subjugating environment and a connected dependency to the unnatural stimulation of certain chemical receptors in her soon-to-be-if-not-already damaged brain." 5) Potentially interesting characters soon devolve into juvenile stereotypes. 6) The heroine stumbles onto clues too conveniently and predictably. 7) Minor characters routinely and predictably become monster food. 8) The novel is populated only by relevant characters (Where is the rest of the staff of the facility? Or other people from outside the community?) 9) The ending is predictable (the mastermind who feels he has to explain everything at the climax), farfetched (a minor character brought in from left field at the end), and dull (evil govt research, genetic mutations, yadayadayada) in about equal parts. 10) Everything is wrapped up too conveniently, except for the archeological part, which is 11) one of the many things left unexplained. 12) There are logical implausibilities (Why leave Clare on the streets for so long?) 13) Why go through the ruse of hiring for a job? Why not just arrange a disappearance and hold the individuals prisoner at the facility, where they can be better controlled and analyzed?
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4 of 4 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
Sloppy and seemed to have been written way too fast, May 15, 2003
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This review is from: Monstrosity (Mass Market Paperback)
As a fan of extreme horror, I was looking forward to this book after I picked it up and read the jacket blurbs. I was disappointed, alas. There were some genuinely creepy moments, but it didn't hang together, either plotwise or logically. There were so many unbelievable coincidences and inexplicable motivations and cliched characters and situations, I just couldn't suspend my disbelief. The ending was so rushed and predictable, it was hard to care who was killing who. This was the first Edward Lee novel I'd read; he has a good reputation, so I plan to give him a chance and try one more of his works before writing him off as a semi-hack. But based on this one book, I'll take Bentley Little, Graham Masterton, or Stephen King any day of the week.
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