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3.0 out of 5 stars
Deal with the Devil,
By Mr. Right "I'm right, you're wrong" (top of the mountain) - See all my reviews
This review is from: From Moon to Moon (Paperback)
A man wants to be a famous painter so he makes a deal with a demon that later turns out to be Satan himself. The deal is that the devil gets to take over the man's body once a month, during the full moon and gets to kill whatever woman the man is dating.
The story starts out strong but weakens as it goes along. There are too many coincidental meetings with people that just happen to be able to see that the man is possessed. It was like the author couldn't come up with any creative ways to introduce this new characters, or he was too lazy to do it. The ending was creative and I think this writer has some talent but he needs to have a professional editor read his work before it is published. Nobody can proof read their own work and this book has too many run on sentences and a few typos. That's what holds these self-published authors back. It's a good story and I would recommend giving it a read. |
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From Moon to Moon by Richard Wagner (Paperback - June 30, 2000)
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