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October 28, 2008
On the heels of her "enchanting and action-packed" (Romantic Times) novel My Immortal Protector, acclaimed author Jen Holling returns to a mystical world where the all-too-human desires of rugged Drake MacKay entwine with the icy cunning of one with the power to heal -- or curse....

Drake MacKay is no stranger to the double-edged powers of blood witches. His own niece Deidra and his best friend were saved by a baobhan sith: Hannah O'Shea, the same spirit who would not heal Drake's dying wife. Nearly consumed by grief and fury, Drake is nevertheless bound by an unholy promise: for those she gave life, he has pledged his own.

Returning to Hannah's remote isle, Drake is stunned to be released from his obligation. And when he overhears a violent plot stirred up by villagers, he finds himself irresistibly called to warn her -- and escapes with her into the night. Alive for more than a century, Hannah has found the words of mortal men to be bitter lies. But there is darkness in their shared past, an evil that threatens Drake's family. Forced to unite, they discover a fire between them that melts their distrust...and a furious passion that may just save them both.


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About the Author

Jen Holling's previous romance novels include My Shadow Warrior,

My Devilish Scotsman, My Wicked Highlander, Forever My Lady,

A Time for Dreams, and the critically acclaimed and RITA Award-nominated

Brides of the Bloodstone trilogy: Tempted by Your Touch, Tamed by Your

Desire, and Captured by Your Kiss. She lives in Texas and is currently

at work on her next novel. Visit her on the web at www.jenholling.com or email

jen@jenholling.com.

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Chapter 1

Drake stood in the dark alley, gaze fixed on the village center, waiting. It was full dark. The night was quiet, cool, devoid of insects. His eyes had adjusted to the darkness, but without the moon it was still difficult to make out any details.

The witch should have escaped by now. Drake's gaze narrowed on the dark smudge of the thieves' hole, marked by a pole. Earlier that day the witch's hands had been nailed to the pole, but later he'd been ripped free and thrown down into the hole.

Drake had seen the cycle often enough in the past six months. It followed a similar pattern each time: the witch was captured, tortured into confession, and then waited in a hole or other prison to be executed. And through each one, Drake observed -- an interested bystander, nothing more. On occasion he would plant suggestions if he thought it prudent, and he always made certain the witch had opportunity to escape eventually.

The escape was of vital importance, since he had to be captured by another village in order to start the whole process all over again.

They'd been through this dance a number of times and the pattern was always the same. Usually by now the witch had escaped and was slinking away into the night, with the occasional frantic stop to feed on a farm animal.

But tonight was different. Drake continued to wait in the darkness, his lips tight, his fists opening and closing rhythmically, debating whether to leave the safety of the darkness. He scanned the town square again. The windows of the houses surrounding the square remained black. He sprinted across the square, dropping to a crouch beside the thieves' hole. He surveyed the square again.

He leaned over the wood grating. "Luthias," he called in a loud whisper. "Luthias."

Nothing but silence. Drake sat back on his heels, listening and waiting, wondering if the witch had finally died.

A baobhan sith did not die easily; Drake knew this, so the silence puzzled him. True, the cycle of abuse had been ongoing for months, and any human man would have died long ago -- or, at the very least, been permanently crippled from all that Luthias had endured. But Luthias was not a human man and had been through worse than the relatively tame bit of torture he'd been subjected to in this village. A dunking. The wheel. Some rocks on the chest. Nothing a baobhan sith couldn't recover from in a few hours.

"Luthias," Drake called again, his voice a harsh whisper. Still no answer.

Drake's chest constricted. If Luthias was dead, then it was over. Drake could be finished with this duty he'd assigned himself.

And move on to the next one, the one he had been using Luthias to avoid.

Drake's head bowed. He stared sightlessly at the ground. He was tired, weary to his bones. His taste for vengeance had been satiated. If Luthias was not dead now, he would be tomorrow, when they burned him at the stake.

Drake stroked his beard. Had it not been for the dreaded task that followed, he would have loved to be finished with this one. It had been six months. Doubtless the thing that waited for him believed he did not intend to fulfill his promise at all. And that was not true. Drake MacKay honored his promises, even the ones that were misery to even contemplate.

It was time to go. He had done what was necessary to protect his family and punish the man who persecuted them.

But it was over now.

He secured the grate over the thieves' hole. He had unlatched it earlier so that Luthias could easily escape. Let him meet the village's sentence. It was in their hands now.

After another visual surveillance of the village, Drake returned to the safety of the dark alley. His horse was stabled close by. Now that he'd made the decision, he didn't want to waste another moment on Luthias.

He saddled his horse and led it out of the village. When he was clear of the last cottage, he mounted and rode into the night, bound for the far northern highlands and a promise overdue.

The island was exactly as Drake remembered it. Windswept, treeless, lonely. A lethargic bell clanged in the distance as a goat wandered through the tall grass. The clouds broke, and sunlight blinded him. He squinted as he crossed the island, following the sound. He remembered the last time he had made this same journey under very different circumstances. He had come here with murder on his mind. To take revenge on the thing responsible for his years of misery. Instead, the blood witch had saved the life of his friend.

This was not a woman who granted favors out of the kindness of her heart. In fact, technically, she wasn't a woman at all and probably didn't have a heart. She was a baobhan sith. A blood-sucking witch. And he owed her a life.

His life.

It wasn't worth much these days anyway.

He waded through the tall grasses to the top of the hill. A lush green valley, dotted with white puffs of sheep, spread out before him. The baobhan sith's house nestled in the side of a hill, not immediately visible to the unobservant. It had a new door -- no doubt thicker than the last one, which he had hacked through with an ax.

The door was locked from the inside, but he had expected no different. Baobhan siths were nocturnal creatures. They derived their power from the night or the moon -- he didn't know which. Because of this they often hid themselves during the daylight hours.

He pounded on the door, not really expecting any response. When none came, he settled down beside the door, crossed his arms over his chest, and closed his eyes.

He slept fitfully, startling awake frequently, hand on dirk, wondering where he was. The moment he remembered, his body relaxed, his eyes turning to the door, still closed, then to the sky, gauging how long until the sun set. Then he shut his eyes and slept some more.

He dreamt, too. Strange, vivid dreams that seemed real and yet couldn't be. He saw the baobhan sith in his dreams, walking in shadows, just out sight. He would tell her to stop running and come out where he could see her, but she only faded further away.

The next time he woke it was in increments and with care. His eyes opened to the darkness. He didn't move as he waited for them to adjust to the gloom. It was night, but no stars or moon were visible. A thick fog had moved in from the water and hung around him, clammy. He suppressed a shiver.

He got to his feet, listening. Sheep bleated in the distance. He felt along the grass wall until he touched the door. It was open, just a crack. He pushed on it, and it creaked inward.

Muscles tensed and ready, he stepped into the house. The darkness was complete; not a single candle lit his way. He had a vague recollection of his last visit six months ago. There had been a table several feet to his right, and on it had been a fat, squat candle. He moved toward the table, hand outstretched until he touched it. His hands skimmed over the tabletop, searching for candle and flint.

Before he encountered anything, there was a scrape, then a spark. A halo of light spread across the table.

She sat at the table across from him, the flickering candle in front of her, her long, slender arm lowering the flint matches to the tabletop. The candlelight lit her hair so that it burned like fire, deep auburn and copper.

The sight of her there sent a jolt of energy through him. His hands curled into fists. She was so still, so quiet. He could discern nothing by her blank expression.

The silence stretched out interminably until Drake felt compelled to say, "Well. I'm here."

Her head tilted slightly to one side as she regarded him thoughtfully. Silken copper hair slid from her shoulder to fall behind her back. "It took you long enough."

He lifted a shoulder. "Aye, well..."

She looked away, disinterested. "You can go."

Drake frowned at the woman before him. She seemed different somehow. Previously she had been enigmatic, mysterious...now she just seemed bored.

"No," he said. "I made a promise, and my word is good."

She waved a pale hand in his direction. "Apparently." The emotionless line of her mouth curved minutely into something resembling a smile. "Your honor is noted, Drake MacKay. No one will speak ill of the solidarity of your word. I release you from your promise."

Drake had been dreading this moment, dreading coming to this island, and most of all, dreading the fulfillment of his promise. Her words should have been welcome. And there was a sigh of relief in his soul. But the larger part of him was annoyed.

She stared up at him, waiting. Her eyes were large and sultry, curtained with thick auburn lashes that seemed too heavy for her to hold up consistently, so they lowered, shadowing her eyes and making her thoughts elusive.

"I came a long way," he said. What was he doing? Arguing? My God -- was he insane?

Apparently he was, because rather than run to the boat and row back to the mainland, thanking God for this reprieve, he was still here.

She seemed as puzzled by his strange behavior as he was. "I imagine you did. And if there had been some way to get word to you about this, well..." She lifted a palm and shrugged. "Well, I wouldn't have done it anyway, so never mind about that." The corners of her mouth pulled tight, and she exhaled. "You are released. Do not be a fool and question it."

His brows drew together as he regarded her. She was right. There was no sense in questioning such a gift. He was free. He inclined his head, not willing to thank her verbally. She held his gaze for a long moment. Then her gaze drifted away, disinterested.

Drake backed out of the house and closed the door. He stood outside, hesitant for some inexplicable reason. She seemed so odd. Not that he had known her well, but he had spent a fortnight in her company, and during that time she had been very different. Though insouciant and understated, she had still seemed alive. Witty and clever; conversant. He had not found her company objectionable.

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  • Mass Market Paperback: 336 pages
  • Publisher: Pocket Books; 1st Pocket Books Pbk. Ed edition (October 28, 2008)
  • Language: English
  • ISBN-10: 1416525866
  • ISBN-13: 978-1416525868
  • Product Dimensions: 6.7 x 4.1 x 0.9 inches
  • Shipping Weight: 5.6 ounces (View shipping rates and policies)
  • Average Customer Review: 4.2 out of 5 stars  See all reviews (6 customer reviews)
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3.0 out of 5 stars 3 1/2 REALLY..., March 25, 2009
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This review is from: My Immortal Promise (Mass Market Paperback)
Hannah O'Shea has lived a century. She is a blood-witch - or baobahn sith, as the locals refer to in Scotland. She has lived in a remote island wanting solitude and peace.

Drake MacKay made a promise to Hannah; that he would hunt the fanatical and evil Luthias and then offer his life to her for her help in saving his niece Deidra and husband Stephen in MY IMMORTAL PROTECTOR.

When he returns to her island, a bored and despondent Hannah frees him from his promise. At a local tavern that night, Drake learns that the villagers are planning too lynch Hannah, so he goes back to warn her.

Realizing that Luthias is not dead, and he still on a psychopathic blood path, now not only to destroy all witches but also all blood-witches as well. It is forbidden for a blood-witch to kill and consume the blood of another, yet that is exactly what Luthias is doing.

A religious zealot, transformed into a blood-witch now, Luthias must be stopped at all costs, since now Luthias wants to exterminate all of Drake's family and Hannah as well.

This was a very fast paced and action packed paranormal. I will say that I liked MY IMMORTAL PROTECTOR better than MY IMMORTAL PROMISE. Both characters - Drake and Hannah were engaging though their relationship was an arduous and difficult one, as Drake blamed Hannah for not saving his wife and allowing her to die. He can't explain his attraction to her, even tough he despises what she is.

The love scenes were not great; quite flat and lackluster. Rushed through and left me feeling that for the most part it was wham-bam thank you ma'am every time Drake made love to Hannah - and I wouldn't even call it that! Which was disappointing. Yet, overall, I found this an appealing story, and was satisfied with the ending.
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This book is a sequel to "My Immortal Lover" ... it's very good and I had an enjoyable buying experience with seller. Very prompt, and nice e-mail. I just found it didn't QUITE live up to the first book. But I'll definitely buy from this seller again.
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5.0 out of 5 stars engaging paranormal romance, November 4, 2008
This review is from: My Immortal Promise (Mass Market Paperback)
Her abusive husband is killing Hannah O'Shea. Her life is saved by a spirit who changes her from human into a "blood witch" immortal healer. However to stay alive Hannah must have human blood.

Eight decades later a desperate widower Drake MacKay begs Hannah to use her healing skill to save the life of a relative. He offers her his life in exchange with one stipulation; give him time to kill his enemy, Luthias, a baobhan sith like the local witch Hannah. Instead the lonely depressed Hannah frees him from his blood debt. When Drake learns of a threat from the villagers to kill Hannah, he abducts her to take her to safety stunned that she told the locals how to kill her. He is willing to die to keep her safe, but soon learns his family is threatened by a psychopathic Luthias. As they go to keep his blood safe, Hannah finds a reason to live; her love for Drake, who reciprocates her deep feelings.

This engaging paranormal romance stars two flawed protagonists struggling with a blood debt, a nasty villain, and love. Hannah makes the tale with her death wish making her the opposite of her peer Luthias whose death wish is to dine on human blood until his victim is dead. Jen Holling is at her best as readers will be hooked from the opening encounter as fans and Drake will wonder whether a baobhan sith blood sucker can truly be in love.

Harriet Klausner
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