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6 of 6 people found the following review helpful
on July 30, 2013
Love to Love.. this one was so beautiful! powerful emotions that put you right there with them feeling it. great connections between characters. easy to visualize whats happening with all the perfect descriptions. Makes me want a Riley of my own! Beautifully written- great story- HIGHLY recommended for romance novel lovers! This is at the top of my list for sure! Cant wait for the next one(as always :D ).
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3 of 3 people found the following review helpful
on August 23, 2013
... but there was just something missing.

First of all and easier to explain, it dragged out a lot. Some paragraphs were superfluous and unecessary and things were said over and over, just in different words. I almost started skipping pages because of that, but I made an effort and hung in there.

Second and possibly trickier to explain is all the reasoning behind Riley's reluctance to get involved with Chelle. All the "I'm too much like my mother" and "I'm not cut out for family life" didn't sound so convincing in comparison to the feelings he had towards Chelle, as for the author's words.

I give credit to Melanie cause she sure had a good story in her hands, although a little cliché 'best friend's little sister' and all. But she had good characters - which brings me to another issue. I know this is not the first one in the series so I was not familiar with all the secondary characters. Even then, there was just too many of them and it wasn't easy to keep track which distracted me sometimes.

Anyway, she has a good writing and most of all, the dialogues were awesome. If not for the problems cited above, I'd have absolutely loved the book. Still, if you want a somewhat light and cute romance, get it.

Oh, I don't know how that works, but the reason I bought this book was cause it kept appearing on my Facebook feed as an ad. Whomever invented that is a genius and I'm sure got a good number of people to do the same thing I did.
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3 of 3 people found the following review helpful
on August 10, 2013
What a beautiful love story!!! I fell in love with the characters!!
I was sad to have it end. Can't wait to read the next one!!
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2 of 2 people found the following review helpful
on August 14, 2013
"My Last; Riley & Chelle" was the sweetest story I've read in such a long time. The love story centered around Riley and Chelle is one of innocence, passion, self-discovery and acceptance and coming to the realization that everyone can be worthy of a true love. Melanie Shawn once again has the ability to make the reader feel welcomed in the lovely town of Harper's Crossing with familiar names and stories. And I can't wait to meet more of them in the next installation. Please keep feeding my addiction for honest, love stories where the men are sexy and romantic and the women are hopelessly lovable.
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2 of 2 people found the following review helpful
on July 30, 2013
Absolutely loved this book!! This is a fabulous series that sucks you in and makes you want more and more!! I'm hooked and can't wait to read about Alex and Jamie in the next book:)
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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful
on August 6, 2013
this book was awesome. had me from start to finish..loved it recommend anyone to read! Melanie shawn is a awesome author! cant wait to read more of her work
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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful
on August 5, 2013
Very enjoyable read about two people who grew up together but never let their attraction for each other show. Wonderfully written and the story just flows beautifully. Put this on the top of your must read list as well as the others by Ms Shawn.
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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful
on August 2, 2013
I tried to read it slow and savor every written word! This book was a beautiful story that made me want to crawl inside the book and be Chelle!! I can't wait for the next book in this series....
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2 of 3 people found the following review helpful
on August 13, 2013
This was an okay read. I mean, it had a sweet Alpha and a sweet heroine, and I love how they reunited after so long (HAWTTTTT), but it just didn't have enough Umph in it. I mean, there was no killer, no crazy stalkers, no big issues,nothing other than just...sweetness. Just really super Sweet. Which isn't bad! It was well written and fun, but there was a lot of talking. So much talking. A little action....and LOTS of talking. So, ehhh - it was just okay for me. The only reason I am giving it the 3 stars is because I felt the, although the blurb above rang somewhat true, a sweet good girl reunites with a bad boy, I don' really feel like he was a bad boy. He's really just a reformed bad boy, who's now a good MAN, but doesn't really fight for what he wants. He's so indecisive, especially when it comes to the fact that she's his best friend's little sister. I like my Alpha's to want the heroine's so much that not even the world, let alone a brother, can make him think differently.
So anywho, it's fun, it's short, it's full of banter and TALKING and just a little sex. Well, a little to me, but, I like my books chalk full of sexy moments. So yeah, read it if you want. If you like SWEET, you'll like this book.
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on April 28, 2015
After Katie and Jason, its her best friend Chelle's turn in this book. Chelle is the one who never causes a bit of harm to anyone, but then her cheating boyfriend dumps her just before Katie's wedding. She somehow manages to get through the wedding, but she needs a change of scene and that's when Katie gives her the keys to her apartment away from town. Chelle needs to think things through and decide where she wants to head, but decides to drown herself in some self wallowing before that. Unfortunately when she doesn't answer her phone, Katie gets desperate and asks Jason to get his brother Riley to check in on her.
Riley has been running with the trouble makers in town as a kid. Then he left for the military and never came back for twelve long years. Now he needs to reintegrate with civilian life, and has plans to manage a bar with a couple of old soldier friends. While he has always liked Chelle, he feels he is much too damaged for her. It doesn't matter that he loves her, he wants what's best for her, and as her brother Eddie and his best friend seems to agree, that could never be him... or could it?
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