3.0 out of 5 stars
A good first effort, with flaws, January 4, 2012
This review is from: Natalie's Good Fortune: A Tale of Piracy and Adventure (Paperback)
I love a good pirate yarn. And "Natalie's Good Fortune," by first-time author Anthony Fanning, is a good pirate yarn. But Fanning almost lost me in the beginning, long before a single pirate was seen.
For one thing, the story is packed with typographical errors. But a good editor also could have helped Fanning tame his style. In the first few chapters especially, the author demonstrates a love for adjectives that far exceeds the demands of the story. His florid writing style is top-heavy, never sacrificing five words when a 20-word exposition would do.
Also, this novel -- which has as its protagonist a 16-year-old girl -- is written in a style that seems most appropriate for young-adult readers. While it certainly doesn't match the flavor of L.A. Meyer's free-spirited Jacky Faber series, Natalie Satterfield is an appealing character, and readers will enjoy the experiences that thrust her from the comfortable life of a young English lady and into the ill-fitting shoes of a castaway and gender-disguised sailor. Unfortunately, the book's young-adult standing is jeopardized by Fanning's abundant focus on the perils of rape, which just seems a bit overused from beginning to end. You'll also read your share about young men and shipboard sodomy, too.
Even so, Natalie is -- or, rather, becomes -- a strong, resourceful character that it's a treat to know. Supporting characters, from the coarse but noble privateer Black John Hayes to the young, terrified stowaway George and even Natalie's rarely seen parents, are well developed and intriguing.
The story, set in 1722-23, is packed with adventure, from pirate attacks to island cannibals, roaring sea battles and sudden squalls. I'm sure Natalie will continue to grow in future volumes.
by Tom Knapp, the Rambles.(net) guy
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5.0 out of 5 stars
NATALIE'S GOOD FORTUNE is an adventure you won't want to miss!, March 31, 2011
This review is from: Natalie's Good Fortune: A Tale of Piracy and Adventure (Paperback)
Natalie Satterfield is a young lass from London Society. Thirteen years old and her mother has just died. Her grandparents decide to send her to her father in the New Colonies of America, where he is expanding his business.
However, on the sail over, Natalie's ship is overtaken by pirates. Terrified, but yet still quick witted, Natalie decides she would rather drawn then let them take her. She jumps out of a port hole and lands in a small row boat that is tied to the ship. She frantically cuts the rope attaching it, and paddles with all her might to a nearby island. Although they chase her, the waves prevent them from catching her. Not to be undone, they raise their musket and fire upon her. They presume her dead, but the idea of someone shooting at her has Natalie fainting into the sandy beaches of the island.
Natalie soon comes upon cannibals on the island. Savages that chase her down the beach until she is rescued by one Captain John Blackbeard. He was stranded on the island awhile back and is in the process of building a ship to leave. He takes Natalie under his wing, and for the first time in her life, she has to work. Natalie learns to love island life and working on the ship. But all too soon, they are ready to sail for America and to her father. But Natalie has changed in the eleven months she has been on the island, and she won't be the same girl her father remembers.
NATALIE'S GOOD FORTUNE is an adventure you won't want to miss! Pirates, savages, and tales of the high seas had me turning the pages into the wee morning. Natalie's character evolves as she learns some of life's hardest lessons, and had me cheering her on in some of her adventures. I haven't read such a great adventure since Treasure Island! I'll definitely be picking up the next in the series, Isle of Lost Souls, in the near future!
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