22 of 26 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
You go your way, Matt, and I'll go mine, January 15, 2012
This review is from: The Night Swimmer: A Novel (Hardcover)
I have now read two of Matt Bondurant's three novels. I hate coming to this conclusion, but I think they're just not for me. We're simply not on the same wavelength somehow. The descriptions always sound interesting and intriguing, but then the book winds up a disappointment for me.
The Night Swimmer is the story of Americans Fred and Elly, but it Elly who is the first-person narrator. The novel's lengthy prologue ends on this ominous note:
"This is hard to describe now. I will have to carefully measure the tone. In my mind, it is a story without words, only the shrill cry of heartbreak. I think of how much time I spent with my head in the water, swimming long stretches of the lake or the churning green sea. I think of what happened on that windy shore, the broken harbor, a small pub on the edge of the world, and I am ashamed."
The catalyst for the tale is a contest held by a beer company. Fred bests all competition to win ownership of a pub on the Irish coast. The couple believes it to be a dream come true, and chance to make a fresh start at simpler lives. And at first they're happy, Fred spending his time in the pub, and Elly pursuing her passion for open-ocean long-distance swimming:
"As I read these horrid accounts, I strangely felt all the more confident of my ability to make the swim to Fastnet. I just knew it wouldn't happen to me. It couldn't. It was as if these other people had engaged in some kind of tragic wager with the sea, putting up their lives on a foolish bet, and lost. But for me it wasn't like that. It wasn't about odds, or my natural ability. The ocean was not my adversary. The sea would never destroy me."
It's hard to say when things got ominous, but that they did. I'm not going to spoil what happens, because frankly, I'm still not sure I know. There were hostile natives, strange events, a downward spiral. Perhaps someone a little more in tune with all things Irish can explain it to me. But it wasn't merely the overly onerous story-telling that I had a problem with. The characters in this tale were difficult to get a handle on. They were opaque. This likely was intentional, as it reinforced the Americans' status as outsiders, but it was difficult to care much about anyone or feel invested in their fates.
Bondurant's prose is okay, though probably not as poetic as it's meant to be. I'm not entirely certain what my problem with Matt Bondurant is. I have trouble understanding what this author is trying to say, but the even bigger problem is that I really don't care. It's time for me to cut my losses.
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11 of 14 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
An interesting story, but..., January 10, 2012
This review is from: The Night Swimmer: A Novel (Hardcover)
"The Night Swimmer" is a beautifully written novel that tells the story of Fred and Elly and their undertaking in moving to Ireland when they win a pub. It's a new adventure for them and they dive into it head-long without much thought. Fred is thrilled with the pub and Elly is free to indulge her own passion--swimming in the ocean. Through a genetic defect, Elly is able to swim in cold water without any adverse affects for quite a long time.
While Fred submerges himself in learning how to run a pub in Baltimore and writing his ever-elusive novel, Elly finds herself taking the ferry to Clear Island on a regular basis to swim. She befriends only a few. Most of the locals do not like strangers, and they ignore her, but some seem to keep track of her swimming in their waters. There are a number of interesting characters on Clear Island, a decades old tragedy that no one will speak of, and an enigmatic goat farmer who seems to have a running feud with the Corrigans, a powerful family who runs most of the island commerce and the ferry service to and from the mainland.
The author does an excellent job of keeping to Elly's viewpoint. I could feel her anguish when her marriage begins to unravel and her hurt feelings when the locals shun her. I enjoyed reading most of the story. However, I did find some things either not explained at all or that they were so subtle that I found myself wondering what just happened especially surrounding climatic events on Clear Island. I feel like I missed something important, but just couldn't put my finger on it. I found this frustrating, and for that reason, I've not rated this novel as high as I would have liked.
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4 of 5 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Disappointing, February 1, 2012
This review is from: The Night Swimmer: A Novel (Hardcover)
This novel disappointed me. Yes, I thoroughly enjoyed Bondurant's descriptions of the wild beauty of the coast of southern Ireland, but that's all the praise I can give this book. The professionals' glowing reviews are overdone, and some customers' reviews are more to the point. While Fred and Elly, the novel's main characters, are well described, the other characters in the book are vague, half described, and their actions are left hanging. Yes, this story has many hanging shreds, and in the end one is left with a big question mark. And not because of the ghosts that are presumed to be all around.
One more thing: Bondurant occasionally lapses into a corny phrase that is acceptable for beginners, but not for an author of several previous books.
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