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Disappointing, February 12, 2005
This review is from: No Room for Squares (Paperback)
I purchased Orlando Lima's "No Room For Squares" in the hopes of discovering a new and exciting voice finally presenting jazz fiction set in the world of today and not in the music's commercial heyday. To my supreme disappointment, the novel turned out to be poorly written, banal, derivative and strangely misogynistic. Mr. Lima's protagonist (nick-named Gamble) is a jazz trumpet prodigy chafing under the pressures of a career in high finance and who, in a moment of professional crisis and literary cliche, quits his job to rehabilitate his jazz chops in New Orleans. Various love interests that occupy several subplots--include a cloying girlfriend, an exotic dancer/mystic, and a generic vamp--are nothing more than one-dimensional objects of Gamble's exploitation and derision. Love scenes are described with the poetry of a medical anatomy textbook, and the few scenes devoted to the music are shockingly perfunctory and lacking in descriptive flourish.
Lima's grasp of jazz musician culture is tenuous; the dialogue uttered by his characters bears no resemblance to jazz "slang" of this or any era. He attempts to shift the narrative from Gamble to two of his cadre of supporters, a device used to a much greater effect in "The Horn," the wonderful and highly recommended beat/jazz novel by John Clellon Holmes. For all the "research" Lima conducted on Bourbon Street, he has one of the narrators, a New Orleans drummer, communicate in a grotesque caricature of a Creole patois formed by simply replacing the terminal consonant of each word with an apostrophe. After a final string of cliches (conflict with the girlfriend, one-upsmanship of a tragically unhip classical musician), the novel comes to a merciful ending.
The wait for a contemporary voice in jazz fiction continues.
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Limachips Press Rocks!, May 12, 2004
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This review is from: No Room for Squares (Paperback)
Lima's first novel? I find that hard to believe. He writes engaging dialogue and develops interesting characters in a way writers twice as experienced can't duplicate. My one complaint is the number of copy editing mistakes. Otherwise, a great first novel. Looking forward to a lot more by this young writer.
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A Great Read, May 12, 2004
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No Room for Squares hits on that essential question we all must encounter in life--just what we want to do with that life. But like all great books, this one doesn't worry itself about coming to any grand conclusion, no resounding summation. Instead, Lima gets down to telling a story, and he's roped a darn solid one. This is an impressive first novel, one with pace and energy that drives the story forward and through what turns out to be a highly accessible read. There are gems here packed throughout, and even though this story makes no pretensions to being some kind of life's handbook, you will certainly recognize a moment or two of life's genuine shade. You were looking for something else?
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