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Had much higher hopes, December 2, 2005
This review is from: Not One More Mother's Child (Paperback)
As someone with a background in the social sciences and an interest in protest groups (particularly those in France), I had somewhat higher hopes for this book. Agree or disagree with Ms. Sheehan, she has become a national figure and is worthy of study for anyone interested in protest movements.
I've listend to many of her speeches and, to be frank, she doesn't give a speech well. At all. That said, this is to be expected - Ms. Sheehan is not a politician, not a polished public relations expert, and likely has little experience in front of large crowds when compared to a politician or academic. She lacks cohesion, tends to ramble, repeats herself, etc. I can accept this relatively poor performance in front of crowds - she doesn't have the experience and it's nerve wracking. Her message is largely driven by emotion, so it makes sense.
I expected Ms. Sheehan to be slightly more collected in this book. It is infinitely easier to structure an argument when putting it on paper - especially with the help of editors. Sheehan wants to make many important points, and I expected this to be the medium she could best use to make them.
The book failed entirely to live up to my expectations. Rather than taking a step back from the raw emotion of the podium and making calm, sensible arguments to support her views, Sheehan has published page after page of ramblings. I understand that Sheehan is not a political science professor or sociologist, but where is her research? Credible sources to support her point of view in the book are sparse - much as they are in her speeches. She lashes out randomly, stopping mid-thought to fit in a jab at her arch-enemies rather than attempt to drive points home with reasonable arguments. It is very difficult to take her seriously under these conditions.
This book simply isn't cogent. The content could have been compelling and the book could have helped Ms. Sheehan gain support for her views, but her lack of organization and constant attacks - some of which border on childishness - degrade any case she was trying to make. I'd really like to understand what Ms. Sheehan thinks - maybe she needs a better editor?
Try again, Ms. Sheehan. Get a better editing team and try again.
In the meantime, for those interested in learning about more negative views on the Iraq war I would recommend Rashid Khalidi's "Resurrecting Empire" or one of many other books on the war. Sheehan's book was not nearly ready for publication.
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114 of 162 people found the following review helpful:
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Poorly written, what was the publisher thinking?, November 30, 2005
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[...] This book is poorly written. [...]
I am not sure if the publisher left it as-is thinking that its bad writing might somehow relate to people, but it was the wrong choice. While I don't agree with the message this book delivers, and I don't agree with the 'author' in general, the editor/publisher of this book should have made it an actual book instead of a paper blog.
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91 of 130 people found the following review helpful:
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Poorly Written, December 2, 2005
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This book was very poorly written. Not only is it full of grammatical errors, but the arguments don't make sense. The facts haven't been well-checked, either. She cites several urban legends that even the mainstream media has disproven.
If you want good liberal books, don't waste your time with this one. Read someone who helps the cause, not hurts it.
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