26 of 28 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
Poorly Executed Popular History with a Host of Errors, March 28, 2005
This review is from: Old Ironsides: Eagle of the Sea: The Story of the USS Constitution (Hardcover)
I'm very surprised to see the 5-star ratings of the previous reviewers; I'm not sure what their backgrounds are or if we in fact read the same book! My background includes the study of the age of sail for over 40 years, the reading of approximately 200 books on the AoS, the writing of two such books, and 27 years in the navy and naval reserve.
I read this book eagerly, having seen Col. Fitz-Enz speaking about it on CSPAN BookTV, and I was frankly charmed by him and his enthusiasm for what's also been my favorite ship since I was in grade school. However, I quickly became appalled at the disorganization, stream-of-consciousness flow, and huge quantities of factual errors. (Just a couple of errors as illustration: Adm. Sir John Jervis defeated but did not "destroy" the Spanish fleet at the Battle of St. Vincent (only 4 of 24 ships were taken); the other historic ship currently preserved in the Charlestown Navy Yard is the USS "Cassin Young" ...not the USS "Cason"; the famous British author C.S. Forester (creator of the "Horatio Hornblower" series) is NOT an "American" author). There are dozens, if not scores, of errors throughout the book, including considerable misspellings and misapplications of common and technical naval and nautical terms. I find this last remarkable, considering the author stresses that he was motivated by his interest in the technology of how man has gone to war throughout history.
Col. Fitz-Enz clearly did considerable reading and research, but clearly understood far less than he needed to before beginning to write. He does have some interesting remarks and insights (I liked particularly his mini-essay on how life moved so much slower 200 years ago). However I fear, as published, this is a marginal work; it's as if it were a "first draft" rushed to print. Moreover, I would have thought he would have spent some decent research time onboard "Old Ironsides" as well as in the tremendous USS Constitution Museum, the Museum's outstanding Library and Archives, and in the Naval Historical Detachment Boston's offices (the remarkable technical craftsmen who constantly maintain the ship); from personal experience, I can testify that they would have opened almost everything up to him and spent considerable time with him. However, it seems he only spent 3 hours on one of the ship's public "turnaround" towed cruises in Boston Harbor, talking briefly with the ship's XO. Living in upstate New York, he could have easily made another trip to Boston; however, for some reason he chose to spend most of his travel time and money in trips to Britain and Washington, DC. It's also surprising that the publisher did not have someone at all familiar with the age-of-sail in general, or "Old Ironsides" in particular, look the manuscript over to catch the myriad technical errors and frequent misconceptions of naval life and history. It's also surprising that there doesn't seem to have been any copy editor to rework organization and flow.
Considering that there are a number of truly excellent books already out there on the USS "Constitution," it's not clear why the author thought he had anything new to offer that might mitigate the poor showing of this book.
This is quick-and-dirty popular history, more suitable for a script for a cruise-ship lecture than a printed book. Far better choices would be Ty Martin's "A Most Fortunate Ship," or Thomas Gillmer's "Old Ironsides: the Rise, Decline, and Resurrection of the USS Constitution."
I truly am sorry for this negative review; I believe the author's heart was in the right place and his enthusiasm quite genuine, but his product has been very poorly executed.
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5 of 5 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Interesting but somewhat disappointing, April 4, 2005
This review is from: Old Ironsides: Eagle of the Sea: The Story of the USS Constitution (Hardcover)
This book covers more about life in the age of sail than it does the history of the USS Constitution. While I learned a lot, probably less than half the book is spent on the ship itself. I was hoping for an exhaustive history and instead got a view of life at sea with only references to the Constitution herself. More time seems to be spent describing public fundraising efforts to save her from being broken up then on her wartime contributions and circumnavigation of the globe.The descriptions of her single ship actions are limited and rely almost exclusively on the reports of the Captains who fought the ships (the reports themselves are printed in entirety) instead of being thoroughly researched and explained. A pretty good book but not what I was hoping for.
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7 of 8 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
One "Constitution" That Needs Amending, March 31, 2005
This review is from: Old Ironsides: Eagle of the Sea: The Story of the USS Constitution (Hardcover)
I find myself in harmony with "Dr. Maturin's" review. Little new here not more eloquently or accurately provided in Ty Martin's "A Most Fortunate Ship" (reviewed earlier and a hands-down recommendation in this genre). Organization is indeed poor, "facts" not in order, etc. A cherished American icon, the author does the venerable lady nor the reader no great service with this entry. As a university treatise reviewed for Masters or Doctoral consideration, this "manuscript" would be subjected to considerable criticism apparently absent from the publisher's editorial policy. And as the earlier reviewer notes, there is no substitute for being there, talking to the experts. An amateur Civil War historian, I have gained considerable insight from hours walking battlefields, speaking with NPS staff, other historians, etc. I would expect at least as much from an author as justifiably enamored with "Old Ironsides" as is Mr. Fitz-Enz.
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