One Too Many Blows to the Head [Paperback]

Eric Beetner (Author), JB Kohl (Author)

Book Description

Publication Date: October 12, 2009

Kansas City, 1939. One story from two points of view: the hunter and the hunted. Ray Ward - seeking revenge for his brother's death in the boxing ring. Detective Dean Fokoli - hot on a killer's trail.Ray's hunt takes him underground into Kansas City's criminal nightlife. Dean Fokoli lives there full time but he's on the run from his own troubles. Two men racing forward to collide like a knockout punch.A razor-edged story of revenge, redemption and what happens when you confront the ghosts of the past.

Editorial Reviews

Review

"A powerful tale of vengeance, rife with pounding action and colorful, complex characters. One Too Many Blows To The Head is a first round knock-out!" --Stephen Jay Schwartz, LA Times bestselling author of Boulevard

"One Too Many Blows to the Head feels like a long-lost pulp you find in a favorite bookstore. A delicious mix of classic hardboiled grit and the heart-heavy world of film noir, it's a one-sitting read that sends you back to a lost time of fight halls, Chicago boys and last chances." --Megan Abbott, author of Bury Me Deep and Queenpin

"Boxing and noir once went hand in glove, but you don't see many boxing novels anymore, and that's a shame. Here's one that dredges up all the blood and spit and sweat and money of the fight game, and wraps it around a tough noir storyline full of revenge and dark secrets. Kohl and Beetner get it exactly right." --Steve Brewer, author of Cutthroat

"Razor sharp debut from noir partnership Beetner and Kohl. From its first savage punch, the dark world of organised crime and boxing grips and refuses to let you go. Highly recommended." --Nick Quantrill, author of Broken Dreams

From the Author

One Too Many Blows To The Head marks the debut collaboration of authors JB Kohl and Eric Beetner. This taut and gritty Noir takes place amid the seedy world of fixed fights and mob influence. Uniquely, it features two first-person narratives as we follow the intertwining story of the hunter and the hunted.

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Product Details

• Paperback: 268 pages
• Publisher: Second Wind Publishing, LLC (October 12, 2009)
• Language: English
• ISBN-10: 1935171321
• ISBN-13: 978-1935171324
• Product Dimensions: 8.5 x 5.5 x 0.6 inches
• Shipping Weight: 14.6 ounces (View shipping rates and policies)
• Average Customer Review: 5.0 out of 5 stars  See all reviews (11 customer reviews)
• Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #2,080,444 in Books (See Top 100 in Books)

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2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:

5.0 out of 5 stars This one won't let you go!, January 1, 2010

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J. F. Juzwik - See all my reviews

This review is from: One Too Many Blows to the Head (Paperback)

This is an absolutely amazing read. Written by two authors, it reads as if one mind sat down and wrote it from start to finish in one sitting. It is that seamless of a read and it does flow that smoothly. As far as the story and characters go, it will truly captivate you. This is not a book you will want to put down until it's finished and when you are done, it will leave you breathless. This would make an amazing film--of course, shot in black and white to keep it's gritty and realistic feel. I highly recommend this book.

1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:

5.0 out of 5 stars stunning, July 20, 2011

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nigel p bird (Scotland, UK) - See all my reviews

This review is from: One Too Many Blows To The Head (Ray Ward/Dean Fokoli) (Kindle Edition)

One Too Many Blows To The Head has been on my must read pile for a while and I finally got around to it while we were away.

Their book is sublime.

Set in the boxing world of 1939/40 it follows the lives of two characters, Ray Ward and Detective Dean Fokoli. They take alternate chapters to give their first-person accounts of what happened after the slaying of Ray's brother Rex in the ring.

Essentially Rex has been set up and Ray needs to get revenge. Fokoli is the man charged with the responsibility of cleaning up the mess to avoid a war between the mobs of Chicago and Kansas City.

Their lives that have strong parallels, though for now they seem to be working in reverse order. Ray has spent his whole life on the boxing scene and has always tried to be as good as he could; it's only with the death of his brother that he releases the demons he's kept buried. Fokoli, on the other hand, has spent his working life on the take, a cop in the pockets of the mob; it's only in recently that he has seen the light and has turned his back on corruption and back-handers.

Not that it really matters which way these guys try to go, for it seems inevitable that they're both completely on the skids whatever happens.

It's a simple idea, I suppose, but it's so brilliantly written that every page is a joy. I had the need to race through the plot and yet to savour the language and the atmosphere created at one and the same time. Somehow I think I was able to do both.

I rate it so highly because it picks many of my soft spots and exploits them with sucker punches.

The two main guys are tough men. Macho guys who can fell a sturdy opponent with a solid blow or a well-placed knee. Their lives are messed up, their loyalties strong (if sometimes misplaced), they speak in quips and lurk in shadows.

They're supported by a list of characters who play their parts perfectly. Seedy landlords, drunken bums, prostitutes, victims, bartenders, cops and robbers all bring an array of shades to the piece.

It has one of the best atmospheres and scenes that I've come across in a good while. In my head it was all black and white like the films of the time. I could smell the rings and the gyms, I kid you not, had a sense of the racial tensions and segregation, felt the blows as they came in, understood the need to start the day with a shot of the hard stuff. I was with them every step of the way and loved the journey they took me on.

Strung throughout, like pearls on a string, are the boxing tips of Ray's father (all the philosophies Ray has seem to come from boxing):

'Pop always told us that if you get into a fight outside the ring, you don't want to play it for the decision. You hit that guy until he goes down and you hit him so he'll stay down. Only thing worse than a guy who is pissed off to come at you in the first place is a guy who's doubly pissed because now you hit him.'

and sharp lines:

'There was a dead plant in a pot by the window. I figured it for a suicide.'

or:

'Memory lane is a dangerous street to walk down.'

and they use objects to tell a story with a simply turned phrase:

'I banged on the window with my wedding ring. It was still good for something.'

The book's a collaboration between two people who haven't actually met. How they produced something so seamless is impossible to tell. I looked for the joins and couldn't spot a single one. What I know they managed was to cut out any waste and perfected their use of words as they worked. If collaboration is this good, then I'm going to try getting in touch with some of my hidden personalities to see what we can come up with.

It's a book that might well have turned out as a painting-by numbers exercise; instead these guys have produced a masterpiece.

An absolute gem.

5.0 out of 5 stars Noir Just Got Darker, January 9, 2012

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Lloyd Ritchey - See all my reviews

This review is from: One Too Many Blows to the Head (Paperback)

One can feel the impact of fists and slash of the razored knife in this powerfully dark story of murder, corruption, and revenge. Vivid, fast-paced, grim, with plot surprises and dark twists. One Too Many Blows to the Head is classic noir. A totally fun read.