5 of 6 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Overall, good, but could have been shorter, November 29, 2010
This book is set just before WWII. It immediately captures your attention. The main character, Ian Wigby, who is living in an orphanage, meets his "sister" Theo under strange circumstances in the opening scene. Mystery as well as psychic ability hangs around her from the beginning. Archetypal figures, symbolic animals, and well-rounded characters make this book a delight to read, except for the rather slow middle section.
The plot centers around these two characters and a mysterious prophecy they find in the cliffs of Dover. A hellhound guards the prophecy, and several scary moments ensue when it comes in pursuit of Ian and Theo when they take it. The middle part of the book unfortunately drags a bit. It feels like a lot of backstory being dumped, and here I struggled to keep my attention focused. The end picks up and keeps you reading breathlessly as the kids make their way through Morocco.
Ian and Theo do not change all that much during the book, it doesn't seem. I would have appreciated a bit more growth or change in them. However, their interactions with each other, and with the character Jaaved, when he is introduced, are well-rounded and complex.
Overall, this book is good for all readers. The target audience of middle readers to early young adult may find itself skimming over the middle section of the book. I did remain engaged enough to finish, but I'm an adult. Descriptions are well done, characters are well developed. But the book could have used a harsher editor.
I could have rated this book four and a half to five stars, with a bit more editing in the middle section. The last part is an adventure ride that will keep you riveted to your seat - just stay in it long enough to get there.
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9 of 12 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
Loved it!!!!, May 29, 2009
When I first got a Victoria Laurie book, it was a gift. Now she is giving us the gift of this new series. I was absolutely blown away by this story. The characters are well written and the story progresses as she builds to the conclusion of this start of the series. I found this novel as engrossing as the first Harry Potter book. She has done a masterful job of making characters that are interesting with a story that pulls you along to the end. What else can I say but, read this book. You will not be dissapointed. She has another amazing series on her hands to go along with Abby and MJ. Keep writing and we'll keep reading.
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2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
4.0 out of 5 stars
A thoroughly engaging read; puzzled by the JK Rowling comparison though., January 12, 2010
It's not fair to Ms. Laurie for reviewers to continually draw the JK Rowling comparsion. This book was a delightful read, but it was a not Harry Potter. And that's OK. It was rather reminiscent of the Boxcar Children stories I was read as a child. If you like engaging adventure stories for younger readers (and I do) this would not be a waste of time. The characters have dimension, there is suspense and intrigue, and the plot was good.
The Harry Potter stories were a once-in-a-lifetime magical (heh) gift. It's unfair to other authors in the genre to try to find a connection to Ms. Rowling's series. Just enjoy the book for what it is, and don't spend too much time looking for what it's not.
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