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Other Girls

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First of all, for all those who bash this book, stop being so serious all the time! =) This is not meant to be serious literature, but highly entertaining fiction. To borrow a line from the book itself, in some sense this is a "children cover your eyes and ladies run for your lives bodice-ripping ban-the-book kind of lesbian lust" kind of book. I, for one, find this book -- in many parts -- very sexy and fun. I also think Ms. Ayres has done a very good job creating characters (at least the two main ones) that I have grown to reallly care about.

Which is why some parts of this book, which describe the horrendous suffering of one of the central characters are so very difficult to read (and perhaps un-re-readable). But fortunately the world does, after many horrors, turn around for our adorable lovers. This is the reason for my comparison between this and the Divine Comedy: just as in DC, the lovers go through 4 stages. First the illusions and temptations of the human world. Secnod the seemingly never-ending torment of hell. Third the painful but necesary purgatory to remake themselves. And finally the bliss of heaven.

I'm certainly not saying Dante should be worried about his status in the literary world because of this book! But this is to make two points: one is that for anyone who is greatly discouraged during the very difficult middle parts, don't give up! two is that this book -- while primarily written for entertainment and guilty-pleasure enjoyment -- is far from totally brainless.

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I have just re-read this book four years after my initial review and felt I should post another. Unfortunately Amazon does not allow it, so I can only edit my old review by adding a new section. Here it is:

Four years ago I reviewed this book, and gave a rather hurried and - it seems to me now - somewhat skewed take on the book, especially in light of my reading experiences of the past four years.

Now think of these following things you might like to find in a book (and if you weren't searching for these things, how did you find this book anyway? ^_^): an insightful lesbian bildungsroman, filled with moments of inspired high comedy and tastefully luscious sapphic sex, dramatic but not contrived, populated by sympathetic characters, whimsical yet realistic, with the added weight of tragic heartbreak. Now how many books like that can you find? Now add two more filters: true love, and an unambiguously happy ending, and how many are left?

For the past four years I've looked. And looked. And looked. As far as I can see, there's Sarah Water's "Tipping the Velvet" (which lacks the comedy but makes up with more and better character evolution) and there's Diane Ayre's "Other Girls."

This second time, my own reaction manages to surprise me: I still can't bear to read the "Broken Time" parts, and I still get absurdly happy near the end, as the delicious anticipation for that dizzying tabula rasa moment builds. I guess it says something about the way Ms. Ayres forged this central relationship between Pip and Elizabeth. Their love is not tested by any of your run-of-the-mill stresses, not even betrayal, but the worst trauma and guilt. In this regard, the depth and strength of their true love is not something that even "Tipping The Velvet" can approach.

Suffice to say, time has only made me appreciate this book much, much more.

p.s.: all you Willard girls, eh, women, English majors out there, please help me understand this sentence: "Years of carrying around that precious cargo lifted with the pitch until one went down with the ship like sunken treasure and the other was set adrift." I have racked my brain and come up with nothing. What does this mean?

First off- I completely disagree that this book is any sort of pulp fiction. This was one of the best books I have ever read, and I have read many. The two most influental characters in the book, Elizabeth and Pip, take a while for a relationship to grow, but that makes it more realistic than having them start off into a relationship right at the beginning.

One of the greatest things about this book was Pip. She was a strong character in the beginning, but because of a rape by an egomaniac who also rapes his beautiful stepsister, the strength that Pip was haloed with dissolves, and the reality of her ruin and damage because of this horrible act become tragic and poignant throughout the novel. Her ruin gets in the way of her relationship with Elizabeth, and Pip's need to find and escape leaves her abandoning the one she loves and dissappearing for 8 years.

A beautiful ending and laughs throughout grant this novel with something very few authors are able to give to their work, especially when dealing with comlex personalities and tragedies.

Despite it's many flaws, numerous of which were surprisingly editorial mishaps, I couldn't put this book down. I have to wonder if the editor was so compelled that they actually read the story, and thus missed simple things like grammatical errors, character name spelling changes, and most of all a lack of fluid time of events throughout. Despite these things I couldn't stop thinking of how genuis Ayres must be. That is how INSANELY pulled in I was by this story. It was real, it was simple in that reality, and I started it thinking there was no way I would finish it, and within a chapter was hooked for the duration. Signs of true genuis, and I'm here today hoping to find more of her work. Those degrading this book were too caught up in what they idealized in a book rather than what was there. Perhaps they were lesbians who had never in their life questioned their sexuality and thus turned to a man, or who were disapointed at the twists and turns and seemingly useless character additives. Finish the books ladies - you will NOT be disapointed. For the first time in my LIFE I finished a book and said - I can't believe it - it could not have ended ANY other way!

Other Girls by Diane Ayres is brilliantly provocative. The pages flow like fine poetry and the content is absolutely titillating. This is not a book for the weak-kneed and our naive mothers but most definitely a must for everyone else. The authors style of writing is most engaging. I say, "Dare to be bold and let yourself get caught in Ms. Ayres's web!"

"This debut novel from Diane Ayres is a frothy good time, packed with sex, seduction, betrayal, revenge, and a healthy addiction to midnight poker. We've heard this girls' school high jinks tale before, but it's rarely been this much good plain fun." Emily Drabinski, OUT magazine

From a 'Willard' alum and survivor of the lesbian vampires:

Diane has done a spectacular job capturing the goings on at the infamous 'Willard School for girls' where I am proud to say I graduated from. She creates vibrant, engaging characters who we can all see a bit of ourselves or a close friend in. This is a beautifully written novel that I will treasure forever. It has become a cornerstone in my life just as 'Willard' has.

Other Girls is a fabulous story! I could not put this book down! I had to know what happened next! So well written that you feel like you truly know the characters in the book and need to know what happens in their lives. I loved it so much I have passed the book on to two friends who also have completely enjoyed the book. Can't wait for the next book by Ayres!!

I really enjoyed this book, and I loved that it was based on the school I currently attend.

Ayers is writing about her alma mater-- which also happens to be my alma mater. The college, its buildings, and even a few of its professors are quite thinly disguised, so for anyone familiar with the college, it's a hilarious read. It's badly written and the plot is a contrived romance novel, but good lord, it's really funny.

Hmm, how can I be tactful about this? I can't. This book [stinks] royally!! The plot is absurd and not funny. The characters are ridiculous in a nonfunny way. The author fell flat on her face in trying to write a humorous book.

Save your money; don't waste it (or your time) on this book. The book is truly, truly awful!

All you need to know about this book: Dude, this book royally sucks!!