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A Story About Women That's For Everyone, August 29, 2006
This review is from: The Owl & Moon Cafe (Paperback)
I always cringe whenever someone says they or someone they know is a writer and would you mind reading something they wrote and letting me know what you thought of it because I think this person is a really great writer and I respect your opinion....
Oh God. Not another one.
The problem is that I can't lie. I've been hardwired (sometime during my early formation, no doubt) to spout the truth about a piece of literature and how I feel about it. This has led to some rather hard feelings by authors who expected me to put on my kids gloves when critiquing/reviewing their work.
So when the son of Jo-Ann Mapson handed me a copy of his mother's latest literary offering, I felt the critical hairs on the back of my neck rise. Oh no. Would I have to crush any friendship I might have with this man by telling him his mother was a hack writer? That her prose stunk? That she needed to take a course on plotting? I opened The Owl & Moon Café with a heavy sigh, plunged in and ...
...was immediately enthralled. I'll have to be honest and say part of the attraction was that The Owl & Moon Café takes place in my hometown of Pacific Grove, California. But I've read stories by other authors that take place here and was, shall we say, less than impressed. The thing that really struck me was that this novel is a women's book -- covering the lives of four generations of women within the Moon family -- but completely engrossed me (a guy) with its excellent plotting, perfect characters, and flowing prose.
The Owl & Moon Café is ground-zero for these women, starting with "Gammy", the widowed owner of the cafe and mother of Allegra, grandmother of Mariah, and great-grandmother to Lindsay.
After losing her teaching job, embittered single mom Mariah returns to Pacific Grove to work at the café in order to support her brilliant daughter, Lindsay, and keep her in private school. But at the café Mariah has to deal with her aging and bible-thumping "Gammy," and her 60s-loving mother. Things quickly turn sour for Mariah as the family learns that Allegra (her mother) has leukemia and must undergo chemotherapy. But into Mariah's life comes a handsome Scotsman who sweeps her off her feet. Trouble is, though, he's only here for a short while.
Lindsay, an 8th grader, is infatuated with Carl Sagan and science in general. She doesn't have many friends and stresses about everything. In fact, she's so worked up all the time that her stomach goes sour, often resulting in visits to the nurses office at school. She also needs to come up with a science project and when she learns of her grandmother's (Allegra's) cancer, she quickly comes up with a topic: medical marijuana.
Allegra, forced to deal with her cancer, finally goes to the hospital only to meet up with a doctor she knows. Dr. Al Goodnough was the love of her life during her younger, wilder days and the two of them rekindle their passions during the treatment of Allegra's deadly cancer. But will she survive?
All of these women coalesce into a melting pot of family, what-ifs, and probabilities as they battle love, family, cancer, marijuana, and finding out the true meaning of belonging somewhere.
I have to share one paragraph from the story that really caught my attention when it came to character development, prose, and flow. This is on page 107 and it's from Allegra's point of view after she'd learned of her leukemia and started having trouble with Mariah, her adult daughter: `Doc had resurfaced at the worst possible time. She was almost fifty, dried up like an old walnut. Her life would play out like a World War II movie, a romance that might have been; only in her case, instead of Nazis, goose-stepping leukocytes. Doc would do his valiant best, but eventually those cells would beat him down. All that would be left of them was Mariah. Hurricane Mariah.'
It's incredible how much information about the characters and the story are revealed in this little section but, there you go, that's great writing.
So the next time my friend at work mentions that his mom has a new book out, he won't have to prompt me to read it; I'll run to the bookstore!
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Six stars!! Better than fudge!!, July 5, 2006
This review is from: The Owl & Moon Cafe (Paperback)
Okay, I admit I'm a bit partial. More than a bit. She's my friend. But, trust me when I tell you she's a dynamite writer. I would love her books even if I didn't know her. And this one is as wonderful as all the others. It's got her trademark down-to-earth, complex characters, absorbing and always fresh and original plots, plural intended because she writes the type of books I like to read, ones where, like life, many things are going on in the character's lives and all of them interesting and familiar. I haven't gotten my piece of fudge yet except fictionally, but I'm telling you, this book is like very, very good fudge, the kind my Kansas grandma used to make, the REAL kind, where you have to time it to get it right...this book is
that, real and right and so, so good. Buy one for yourself and one for your best girlfriend. You won't be sorry.
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