From School Library Journal
Grade 6–9—Soto skillfully captures the voice and emotions of young teens in love. The free verse poems are grouped together in two sections: "A Girl's Tears, Her Songs" and "A Boy's Body, His Words." There are selections about first kisses ("I haven't been kissed, /But I'm waiting"), young love ("We were young, not yet fourteen./What chance could our love have/In a world so rough?"), jealousy ("You narrowed your eyes at me,/Flashed red coals from deep inside you"), and rejection ("When she said no,/I took my loneliness to the river"). In "Danger" a boy says, "If I knew you were in trouble,/I would take a shovel and shovel my way/To your house, six blocks away,/And risk live wires hissing like snakes./Love, I know, can be hazardous to my health." Since many of the narrators are 13 or 14 years old, these short, accessible poems will appeal to middle schoolers, especially. A great addition to poetry collections.—
Ann Nored, Wilson Central High School, Lebanon, TN Copyright © Reed Business Information, a division of Reed Elsevier Inc. All rights reserved.
“If only you would turn / And see me / Seeing you.” In rapid, clear free verse, young teens, both girls and boys, speak about falling in love—the jealousy, loneliness, and hurt of rejection and breaking up, as well as the romantic bliss. The speakers are as varied as their hairdos, which include curls, straight locks, Afros, or green spikes; and the contemporary settings are diverse, too, from the classroom (“I secretly open my cell / And look at you, digitally caught”) and cafeteria (“Lucky fork touched your lips”) to the forest (“where boys go / When a girl says no”) and town streets, where the speakers skateboard. The sex is minimal, mostly dreams (“Her hair against my throat / And the pink bud of her tongue”), and even parents’ discussion of sex isn’t direct; in one poem, a dad tries, and fails, to talk about the birds and the bees. Young teens will enjoy the “love sick” puns and the metaphors, lyrical and sad, that show there is poetry in the way they speak. Grades 6-9. --Hazel Rochman