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Perfection [Kindle Edition]

JL Spelbring
3.9 out of 5 stars  See all reviews (52 customer reviews)

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Book Description

The personification of Aryan purity, Ellyssa's spent her whole life under her creator's strict training and guidance; her purpose is to eradicate inferior beings. She was genetically engineered to be the perfect soldier: strong, intelligent, unemotional, and telepathic. Only Ellyssa isn't perfect. Ellyssa feels emotions--a fact she's spent her life concealing. Until she encounters the epitome of inferiority: a dark-haired boy raised among renegades hiding since the Nazis won the war a century ago. He speaks to her telepathically, pushing thoughts into her mind, despite the impossibility of such a substandard person having psychic abilities. But he does. His unspoken words and visions of a place she's never visited make Ellyssa question her creator. Confused and afraid her secret will be discovered, Ellyssa runs away, embarking on a journey where she discovers there is more to her than perfection.

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About the Author

J.L. Spelbring lives in Texas, where she wanders out in the middle of the night to look at the big and bright stars. Besides knocking imaginary bad guys in the head with a keyboard, she enjoys being swept away between the pages of a book, running amuck inside in her own head, pretending she is into running, and hanging out with her kids, who are way too cool for her.

Product Details

  • File Size: 843 KB
  • Print Length: 331 pages
  • Publisher: Spencer Hill Press; 1 edition (July 16, 2013)
  • Sold by: Amazon Digital Services, Inc.
  • Language: English
  • ASIN: B00DQZ2L62
  • Text-to-Speech: Enabled
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  • Lending: Enabled
  • Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #271,455 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
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27 of 28 people found the following review helpful
4.0 out of 5 stars A very different kind of dystopian! July 20, 2013
Format:Kindle Edition
Dystopians have been very hit or miss for me lately, so I went into this one with some trepidation. I'm glad I read this one though because it was great. It was pretty different for a dystopian. I feel like so many are just carbon copies of each other lately, but this one definitely had its own flair. Then it threw in some sci-fi in the form of genetic enhancements and I was sold.

Imagine a world where World War II had gone very differently. A world where Hitler had succeeded in his pursuit of purity. Well that is the world this book is set in. This is a world built on the ideals of Hitler. A world that is still striving for perfection. A world eradicating anyone different, whether it be brown eyes, brown hair, or darker skin. If it is not blue eyes and blond hair, it's imperfect. You could see how things may get crazy in this world. You can also probably guess where the genetic altering comes in now too. Genetic altering can make the world perfect and create a "superior" being. This is what Ellyssa is a product of.

Ellyssa was an awesome heroine. It was so interesting to watch her throw away everything she thought she knew and open up to new ideals. She slowly learns to feel, but she still remains deadly and smart. I love how she recognized her shortcomings and realized that she may be smart but that she still has a lot to learn. I also liked how truly kickass she was. I also loved that we got to see the other side of things in Perfection. We got to read from the villain's point of view as well, which is something I always enjoy. It is so interesting and scary being inside their heads.

What I really loved about this book is that it took me on an awesome ride. It was nonstop action from beginning to end. The book opens up to Ellyssa on the run.
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12 of 14 people found the following review helpful
Perfection is a chilling picture of what life could be if selective genetics goes completely wrong. They are trying to make a perfect soldier, and as far as looks and strength and mind reading goes, they have it in Ellyssa. But they consider her emotions her weakness. She learns through her escape that those emotions can really be strength.
This is an alternate history I guess you would consider, because it is basically a dystopia where Hitler's ideals are realized and they are working to eradicate those who aren't of perfect race, and taking it even further with superior intelligence and strength.
She tries to run away from the place she was made/born because a strange for this world looking boy with dark hair being questioned broke through her mental shield and screamed a place at her. And she deletes and changes things in the database and goes on the run. It's so much fun to watch her learn to trust others, feel loss, sorrow, joy, laughter, and most of all, fall in love.
While I understood the choice for a third person pov, I connected most with Ellyssa and wanted to be from her point of view the most. I didn't connect with the other characters, but they gave valuable insight into what is going on while Ellyssa is running and when she finds unlikely allies.
There is plenty of action behind the character development to keep the story going. The ending is pretty good, but the epilogue makes me know there needs to be another book in this series. There are also ingeniously crafted villains that will make you want to wring out their brains.

Bottom Line: Action packed and chilling alternate history with a main character I grew to love.
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8 of 10 people found the following review helpful
4.0 out of 5 stars Great YA dystopian July 16, 2013
It's been a while since I read a YA dystopian book, and I'm glad it was this one. J.L. Spelbring was able to create a magnificent world in this book. From the first page I was enamored with Ellysa. Created at The Center, she was the poster child for Hitler's vision. Blond hair, blue eyes with a little extra. Dr. Hirsch has managed to engineer children with superior characteristics. These children are to be models for future soldiers. Soldiers that were bred to eliminate anyone who isn't within the image the good doctor has envisioned. Each child created has at least one power to go along with their superior intelligence, speed, fighting skills and the ability to show no emotion. Self preservation and following orders are all that matters. Ellysa's power is mind reading. After a renegade is brought to The Center as a hostage, he reaches out to Ellysa to let her know things aren't what they seem. Ellysa does a little investigating, and finds horrors beyond her imagination. Armed with this new information, she decides to escape. Hardships follow and she is soon injured and lost. Renegades happen upon her sleeping and decide to take her in for medical attention. What she finds there is a shock to her entire belief system. Can she trust these renegades she has been taught to fear and eliminate?

Lots of action and suspense. I can't wait to find out what happens next. The cliffhanger ending is fabulous!

I received this book from the publisher in exchange for my honest opinion.
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5 of 6 people found the following review helpful
4.0 out of 5 stars Perfection July 23, 2013
Format:Kindle Edition|Verified Purchase
This book is very well written. Hard to put down. From start to finish the action kept you interested. I will refer this book to my friends.
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4.0 out of 5 stars Good read
Good story but I found several typos.
Published 23 days ago by Thomas C. Andolina
3.0 out of 5 stars Fast paced thriller
I am giving this book a solid three and a half stars. It was engaging from the first page until the last and I was completely invested in the characters and in the story. Read more
Published 29 days ago by Arali
5.0 out of 5 stars Great Dystopian novel!!
Oh man! This story was incredible! It was almost like a coming of age novel. The story is set in current times (as far as I could tell) but instead of the Allies winning World War... Read more
Published 1 month ago by Tulene Farwell
2.0 out of 5 stars New take on an old idea.
This is a story with little depth. The most interesting thing was the enlightenment of the central character and that was fluffy. Read more
Published 1 month ago by Emerald Tommy
5.0 out of 5 stars Awesome Book
I loved this book! All of the action and adventure was awesome. I recommend this to anyone who likes action books or anyone who enjoys an interesting story and plot.
Published 1 month ago by Luke Clay
4.0 out of 5 stars Good
This book is a good attempt to do something different in the hunger games/divergent/maze runner genre. Read more
Published 1 month ago by Mark M
5.0 out of 5 stars What is perfection?
I liked this book because I have always thought there are still those out there who are trying to manipulate the human mind and body to fit their idea of how it should be. Read more
Published 5 months ago by Katherine Byrd
4.0 out of 5 stars Very Good Series Starter
Perfection was a book that I was happy I stuck with. The beginning started with a lot of action and it was a little jarring for me. Read more
Published 5 months ago by Heather's Book Chatter
3.0 out of 5 stars Perfection
I was incredibly intrigued after reading the synopsis for this story. I had imaged interesting scenarios for a world where Hitler had won the war. Read more
Published 6 months ago by Monique @ Mo_Books
3.0 out of 5 stars 3.9 Stars - Fun alternate world

In this alternate world Hitler won the war. The US is full of blonde hair, blue eyed people - all dressed according to what type of job they held. Read more
Published 8 months ago by jamie buckholtz
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More About the Author

J.L. Spelbring lives in Texas, where she wanders out in the middle of the night to look at the big and bright stars. Besides knocking imaginary bad guys in the head with a keyboard, she enjoys being swept away between the pages of a book, running amuck inside in her own head, pretending she is into running, and hanging out with her kids, who are way too cool for her.

Her novel, Perfection, will be released in July, 2013.

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