The script contains some great visual/sound match cuts that stitch both of their stories together.
The story is well-structured and moves at a good pace. Overall, this is a fantastic story that is well-paced and manages to hook and keep the audience's attention. The writer shows strength in telling a good story and creating tension and suspense. This could be a strong, satisfying love story.
Personal reasons script has lots of exciting elements that will hold the viewers interest.