23 of 23 people found the following review helpful:
4.0 out of 5 stars
PLENTY OF CLUCKS AND CHUCKLES IN THIS STORY !, May 15, 2009
Few young readers have been able to resist the smile provoking poultry series created by the husband/wife team of Mary Jane and Herb Auch. Titles such as Peeping Beauty, Superchicken and Egg Marks the Spot have won the Auchs a host of fans. The Plot Chickens is sure not only to delight those familiar with these stories but garner many new followers.
Henrietta, our favorite pop-eyed chicken, loves books, so she goes to the library to find some books to read to the other chickens in the coop. Next, Henrietta decides that if reading is so much fun writing a book must be even more enjoyable. As she begins to type her story (hunt and peck system, of course) young readers will learn the seven cardinal rules of creating a story from finding a main character to developing a plot to making your story come alive by using all five senses.
Writing isn't Henrietta's only skill, she also decides to make her own books. Of course, Mary Jane Auch's wonderfully colorful illustrations will bring many smiles. So, The Plot Chickens is an opportunity for young readers to both laugh and learn.
- Gail Cooke
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20 of 20 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
I love this book!, May 21, 2009
I collect anything written by Mary Jane Auch, especially her childrens' picture books. However, I love "The Plot Chickens" so much I would have bought this book no matter who wrote it. The story is charming and teaches about writing in a distinctly kid-friendly way, the illustration are outstanding and eye-catching. As a grandparent I've found my grandchildren love this book and ask me to read it to them over and over. As an educator (I'm a Special Education teacher) I am fast finding that "The Plot Chickens" is becoming a key book that I use in teaching my students not only to write, but to love writing. In fact, I'm developing a lesson plan to submit to WritingFix.com (a site for teachers on teaching writing) using "The Plot Chickens."
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8 of 9 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Worth it for the illustrations, October 8, 2010
This review is from: The Plot Chickens (Paperback)
Is this supposed to be a kid's book, or some kind of inside joke among writers? By the time most "kids" are old enough to understand the jokes knocking publishers and reviewers, they're long past kids' books. Actual kids - the ones this book is ostensibly aimed at - are likely to be pretty baffled.
Anyway, the book opens promisingly. Henrietta the chicken loves to read, she gets books from the library and reads to her aunts, and then she decides to write her own book.
Following a guide called "Writing Rules", Henrietta, with some rather unwelcome help from her aunts, writes a story. While the rules may be good so far as they go, the story Henrietta creates is, in the words of her reviewer, "odiferous". I can't suspend my disbelief enough to believe that the story time children voted it their favorite. It really does stink. Perhaps "Writing Rules" should add a ninth rule: "Make your story interesting".
I was also disappointed by the humor in the book. The title is so clever, I was expecting more of the same, but, sadly, most of the puns are just variations on substituting "eggs" for "ex" (e.g., "eggshilarating"). And, as noted, the pages dealing with submitting the story for publication, getting rejected, and the review I just found baffling and rather out of place in a children's book.
The problem with self-consciously writing about writing, especially for children, and especially if you are trying to be clever, is that it has to be really well done. I just didn't think this book met that mark. For a better example, read "A Book" by Mordecai Gerstein.
The writing alone would have earned this book two stars, in my estimation, but I gave it three because the illustrations are genuinely excellent (or, perhaps "eggscellent"). They are clear, colorful and engaging, and they add a bit of the humor that is missing in the writing.
Check this book out from the library if your child is around seven or eight. They may enjoy the corny puns once or twice and they may be inspired to write their own story. But I doubt many kids will want to return to this over and over.
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