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4.0 out of 5 stars
Detailed look at the early stages of a budding relationship, March 25, 2010
Warning: This review might contain what some people consider SPOILERS.
Rating: 7/10
PROS:
- I liked both of the characters a lot. They struggle with real issues and have their own individual hang-ups, but they're both very selfless. They're constantly concerned about each other, each trying to make sure that life is beautiful, happy, and problem-free for his boyfriend.
- The obsession of young people is depicted well. The guys meet and have an immediate connection, and then they can't stop thinking about each other. Ever.
- There's an incredible amount of depth in the examination of Ryan's and Dante's thoughts.
- The flirting is sweet and tentative and nervous and lovely. Then the progression into physical intimacy is the same way.
CONS:
- The characters are 18 and 19, so I had a little bit of trouble believing in the "foreverness" of the relationship. They might really be soulmates, but aside from the first chapter, which details Ryan's injury and the immediate aftermath of it, the book covers a time span of about 2 weeks. I couldn't make myself buy completely into a forever relationship between two people who are so young when all I saw was 2 weeks.
- Ryan treats his mother horribly at times. This is a book about teenagers, sure, and Snyder creates a pretty accurate depiction of teenage isolation, but I wanted to smack Ryan on more than one occasion. His mom is overbearing sometimes, but he can be an ungrateful little jerk. (Dante, on the other hand, loves Ryan's mom and even gently suggests a couple of times that Ryan should be nicer to her.)
- The writing is a little dense. The exposition is very detailed and contains a lot of sentences that are sort of stream-of-consciousness. Example: "From his room Ryan heard every word, mortified, but in the end she got her way, she always does, and that's more good news Ryan's just waiting to tell Dante, that they are definitely staying together, the room has already been reserved, thanks to his mother."
- The ending is pretty open; there are several conflicts that surface throughout the story that are left unresolved at the end.
Overall comments: This book's in present tense, which I always find a little weird, but the tone is conversational and relaxed. The characters have a lot of room to develop: there are 350 pages, with a lot of text on each page. Overall I think this is worth reading, but it's not a quick read: it's meaty and a little cumbersome.
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5.0 out of 5 stars
Power Play, October 16, 2008
This review is from: Power Play (Paperback)
Ryan Talonovich was the star of his college hockey team before he was seriously hurt at practice. The injuries he sustained have put him in a wheel chair. It'll be a long time before he can walk again, never mind skate. Ryan is angry and depressed. Watching his teammates skate makes him feels worse. It's at the rink that he meets Dante Espinoza. Dante is an exceptionally talented speed skater working towards his dream of going to the Olympics. Ryan and Dante hit it off and soon, romance follows. Dante has to work hard to afford to skate, his mom doesn't approve of it, and he's got issues with his teammates. Ryan is hurting, mentally and physically, and his mom's over protectiveness is driving him nuts. Will the love Dante and Ryan find in each other's arm see them through the rough road ahead?
Power Play is a wonderful love story. It's full of angst and passion. The emotion pours off of every page. Whether it is Dante's feelings about his lecherous boss or his need for his mother's approval or Ryan's fight to get back on his feet or his struggle to cope with his mother's over protectiveness, you can feel every one of their emotions. The love and desire Dante and Ryan have for each other creates one poignant and erotic moment after another. Power Play has fantastic characterization. You really get to know Dante and Ryan, who they are, where they're going and what makes them tick. The same can be said for every character in the story. The innocent and intense feelings Dante and Ryan have for each other are extremely endearing and sexy. Ryan is shy and nervous. He's strong, but reduced to near helplessness. It doesn't sit well with him and he struggles to find himself again throughout the story. Dante is exactly what Ryan needs. He's protective, honorable, and gorgeous. His own battles are hard won. I felt intimately a part of Dante and Ryan's relationship as it unfolded across the pages. Power Play is uplifting and beautiful, although, I wanted more at the end. I wasn't done reading about Dante and Ryan! Power Play is another example of why J.M. Snyder is one of the best author's of gay romance.
Nannette
reviewed for Joyfully Reviewed
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4.0 out of 5 stars
A Sweet Romance with Real Angst, May 19, 2011
The problems facing Ryan and Dante feel very much like real ones, not the usual tripe thrown into romances. Ryan is recovering from a horrible skating accident and seriously unsure if he will ever walk again. Dante faces daily harassment for his sexuality, harassment from his boss and struggles to afford to skate for his dream of Olympic goal. They need each other but they're young and very vulnerable.
The characterization is solid. You feel Ryan's anger at everything and everybody, especially his over-protective mother, as he deals with his sudden disability. You feel Dante's isolation and fear. At the same time, both young men have a strain of honor and strength that makes you cheer for them. The characterization really carried the story.
The negatives: I felt that there was a little problem in making this quite so soon after Ryan's accident. The therapists wouldn't have been pushing him quite so hard at such an early stage in his recovery, but I think that was done for plot reasons. It did give me pause. I did NOT like the author deciding they should have unsafe sex. It added nothing and is a terrible and dangerous message to young men. And I thought, surprisingly enough, that the author ended it too soon. Too many loose threads were left in the story. Having come to like these characters, I wanted to know more about what happened to them.
The negatives are very far outweighed by the positives in this very well-written gay romance.
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