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Pretense for Murder Kindle Edition

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Length: 56 pages Enhanced Typesetting: Enabled

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  • File Size: 3367 KB
  • Print Length: 56 pages
  • Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
  • Publisher: Twisted Root Publishing (September 3, 2011)
  • Publication Date: September 3, 2011
  • Sold by: Amazon Digital Services, Inc.
  • Language: English
  • ASIN: B005L90XV6
  • Text-to-Speech: Enabled
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  • Lending: Enabled
  • Enhanced Typesetting: Enabled
  • Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #1,570,518 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
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8 of 8 people found the following review helpful By Dragon Lady Ness-a on September 25, 2011
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This short story is apparently a prequel for the book, "Afterburn", which I haven't read. Because of that, I don't think I got the full impact of the story.

Vallon is a student at the American Geological Survey Prepratory Academy School for the Gifted. She's sixteen, and is rebelling against the rules. Gifted even among those considered gifted, the rules chafe against her nature. The extent of this gift isn't well explained, but somehow those gifted can alter reality. However, the use of the power causes a physical/hormonal reaction that makes the user extremely, uh, amourous. Use of the gift unsupervised is against the rules, but Vallon has been sneaking off campus to practice her gift. This time, as she's coming back from one of her illicit sessions, she finds a dead body...and a phone booth?!? Someone's been using power, she can smell it, but why? And why are the adults discouraging her from asking questions?

These, and other questions are explored in this 5-10 minute short story. It is intriguing, but I feel that there are parts of the backstory that the reader misses without knowing the novel. For instance, what is the full extent of this power? And what is the purpose of the American Geological Survey and to what purpose are these kids being trained? Just not enough substance to truly satisfy, but enough to tweak interest. The murder is solved and it all makes sense, but without more character development it just doesn't satisfy on it's own.
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4 of 4 people found the following review helpful By leigh7911 on October 13, 2011
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The story itself was fine and kept me reading along and entertained, with one exception. I could not get past the glaring error of a telephone booth being used, and promoted as the vehicle of Doctor Who, when in fact he travels in a police box. Nit-picky though this may seem, it just struck me as odd. There's just no excuse for a mistake over such an iconic image, especially when it turns out to be fairly integral to the plot.
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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful By H.Rhoads on April 6, 2014
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Strange story for me. I love mysteries but this was more for younger people however I'm not sure I'd like my own kids to read it. It is more of a short story and too fast of an ending. I like mysteries that keep you guessing and each time you think you have it figured out something happens and you have to start all over. This was not one of those books
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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful By G. Cox on February 22, 2014
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Some might accuse this story of being too derivative of Harry Potter, but I enjoyed the differences. The setting is near Seattle, the feel is more modern, and the teenage angst comes through clearly. I like that it is from a girl's perspective, and the concept of the afterburn is interesting, but I could see how it could get out of hand. I also like the way the story is developed as a murder mystery.

I obtained a free copy through an Amazon promotion, so I am very happy with the story. But I could see how someone who purchases it at regular price might not be happy with it. The short story takes up 70% of the ebook, and the rest is the first part of another book about the same character.

I think it is an effective marketing tool, but I find it hard to understand the pricing when many novel-length ebooks are being sold for less.
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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful By Kathleen A. Plyler on June 8, 2012
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I thought this was a full length book, but it was only a short story with a Preview chapter or two of another book. There wasn't enough story for me to decided if I would really like the book.
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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful By DeeDee Brown on February 28, 2012
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I thoroughly enjoyed this short story. Although set in kind of a fantasy-esque situation, all was explained in a very capable manner that caught the reader up to speed quickly. The characters were interesting as was the plot.
The only part I didn't particularly enjoy was the sexual tone as the people involved were teens. I felt like the subject was handled too casually and with carelessness.

I did enjoy the excerpt from another of Ms. Abrahamson's books that deal with the title character as an adult. I would be interested in reading more from this author.
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