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2.0 out of 5 stars
ANOTHER STORY RUINED BY THE ENDING, December 12, 2006
A pity really. It was a really nice story to begin with; a runaway princess (princetta), a pirates son out to rescue her, ships, monsters and magic. What more could anyone want in a story?
A decent ending maybe? Not going to find one here. Okay, so it's a "bad" ending. Bondoux is obviously one of those authors that think needlessly killing off a few protagonists is the height of literary excellence. I admit I don't like those kinds of endings, ruins the whole story for me, but it might be a little more palatable if it weren't done in such an off-handed and abrupt manner.
Anyway it did spoil the story for me and I went away from it with a bad taste in my mouth.
NOT RECOMMENDED.
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6 of 7 people found the following review helpful:
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Unfulfilled Potential, January 2, 2009
This review is from: The Princetta (Paperback)
I'll admit, what first caught my attention about this book was the cover (I bought the newer version of this book). However, what really convinced me to actually buy this book was the brief summary on the back and the letter in the prologue. I thought this books was going to be about a strong, independent heroine who would do anything to preserve her freedom. Perhaps I did think that this book was going to be a bit cliche and somewhat like a romance novel for young adults, but that was still okay with me. I'm generally easily satisfied as long as the main characters have true strength. However, all my preconceptions about this book were very, very wrong.
The book started off well, with much potential to go in several directions. The main one I was thinking (especially from the description on the back) was that the heroine, Malva, the princetta, would stow away on some ship, be discovered by the captain, and they would fall in love and blah, blah, blah. Pretty cliche, but I like cliche, as long as it's well written cliche. This story did none of that, which I was pleasantly surprised by, but not for long.
I'm not really going to go into a step-by-step detailed outline of the plot or how this story progressed, by what I am going to do is discuss what I thought were some major flaws in the book. Poor editing (and uncreative place names) aside, Malva is one of the main reasons why this book was so hard to enjoy. As I was reading the novel I had a really hard time relating to her or even liking her very much. For someone who worked up the nerve to run away from home, and abandon her position more or less in the lap of luxury, Malva was an incredibly weak character.
For all her claims of wanting to be independent, at every turn Malva could do nothing by herself. First she has to depend on her maidservant to give her strength and take care of her. Next, when Malva and her servant are separated, and Malva is captured and sold off to be a part of a harem, she becomes sniveling and weak. She becomes dependent on another girl in the harem named Lei. Without Lei, Malva would have been fish food long ago. I find it ironic that there are strong female characters in this book (although they still don't have much personalities, but at least they take action), the leading lady is not one of them. She constantly has to be rescued by someone else, be it man or woman. Her final rescuer is the male lead, Orpheus, who she almost instantly becomes dependent on. This brings me to another flaw in the tale.
The love between Malva and Orpheus seems to spring up from out of nowhere. They all of a sudden become very important to each other, even though they just barely met. What's more is that once Malva starts liking Orpheus she starts becoming (pardon my language) a b*tch to Lei (who was rescued along with Mava from the harem) at times.
Another thing I want to mention is that once Malva is rescued from the harem the book just kind of seems to fall apart. Not many things make sense. They have to face obstacles and ordeals that aren't really quite clear in their prupose. Also, there seems to be pointless deaths along the way. And just when you think things are going to have a happy ending. Bam! You're sideswiped with ANOTHER pointless death that occurs in the most ridiculous of ways in my opinion. I'm not even going to go into what I think about the villain in this book, and personally, I thought the ending of the novel was horrible.
I could have forgiven the confusing episodic ordeals the characters had to go through. I could have forgiven the inexplicable romance between Malva and Orpheus. I could have even forgiven Malva's lack of likeability, weaknesses, and her utter dependence on others (it's not until the very end that she shows any ability to act on her own at all, which occurred far too late to make her likeable) if the ending had just been good. I can forgive a lot when there's a cheesey happy ending. There wasn't one in this book. The ending was depressing, unnecessarily so.
If you like weak heroines, confusing episodic tales, romance with no foundation, and lack of imagination and creativity, then this is the book for you. If you like strong female characters with and powerful and imaginative plot, then I'd suggest you skip this book. It's a shame this book ended up the way it did when it started out with so much potential.
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