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3.0 out of 5 stars
A Fascinating World, April 3, 2009
This review is from: Probability Angels (Paperback)
I feel fortunate that I am in a position to occasionally read self-published books. Not all of them are worth taking the time to write about; however, this one certainly is. Though it has its weaknesses, Probability Angels has enough going for it to make it worth reading.
The strongest part of the book is the first half, when the reader gets a chance to explore this clever world and learn about its people. Or, rather, its "probability angels"--people who have died after making certain choices, which leave them spirits roaming the earth, "pushing" human beings towards different paths, both good and bad. But in doing so these "angels" experience pain and huge transfers of energy.
It is a real pleasure to learn about the powers of this alternate world and, in particular, to meet its characters. Matthew, the newbie, is in some sense the eyes through which we see this world. Yet it's Epp, the ancient one, and Kyo, the strange one, who are ultimately much more interesting as we slowly learn their history. They are also the driving forces that move the plot forward.
There were a few small problems with the book from the beginning, however. Mainly, a tendency to disguise exposition as dialogue. Still, as I moved through the first half of the book, I thought it might be a real surprise, a genuine triumph. Unfortunately, when the climax of the plot starts to develop in the second half, it doesn't quite live up to the nice groundwork that's been laid.
The second half squanders the ambiguity of the first half by laying out a basic good vs. evil battle between various kinds of spirits. And a lot of the questions that the reader expects to be answered in these pages are left unknowns. In some cases, the characters themselves ask the same questions the reader has and are greeted with another character's "I don't know." I guess it's okay that things are unknown at certain stages for the characters, but the reader--at least this reader--wants a little more fulfillment.
Still, in the end, I have to commend Mr. Devon for coming up with a very clever premise and creating a very interesting world. If I hoped he did a little more with the plot to exploit his premise; well, others may see it differently. But that doesn't change the fact that Probability Angels is a good read.
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5.0 out of 5 stars
A wild ride, February 17, 2009
This review is from: Probability Angels (Paperback)
I'm not quite sure what the title of this book means, but that didn't interfere with my enjoyment of it. To begin, I didn't quite understand how folks who are dead could materialize at will, and eat and drink (also drink while not material), and how they could feel pain, etc.. I've always said that I accept the world that the author presents to us, so I just went along for the ride, and what a wild ride it was! There seems to be something happening on every page, and you keep turning pages to find out how everything is going to end.
The idea that dead folks "push" the living into doing things that ultimately help either themselves or mankind as a whole is unique, as far as I know. Of course, there must be tension to keep the plot moving, and the fight between the "live" spirits and the "dead" spirits (I know that sounds strange, but read the book and you'll understand) keeps the reader riveted. The characters are quite well drawn and you want to really get to know them as you go along.
This is not a book for everyone's tastes, but there aren't many like that anyway. If you can keep and open and inquisitive mind, you'll enjoy this book as much as I did.
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3.0 out of 5 stars
Enter a plane between heaven and earth with Devon's non-angelic beings in this unique tale., May 23, 2011
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Probability of Angels is not what I expected however I did enjoy the book. Although at times I found it somewhat confusing, it was mostly due to not knowing where Matthew really was or what was going on. I did find the characters interesting and they all have a little gift like the Fantastic 4 comic series. Epp reminds me of Samuel L. Jackson he is calm and cool even while things are crazy around him. Devon did good placing as much emphasis as he did on Epp and Matthew. You tend to look forward to their characters throughout the book and when Epp is in danger you really feel badly for him. Are their really angels in this adventure? Just as the title suggests it is a probability since the location seems to be some sort of level or plane and not heaven itself. I believe Devon could go far with this series if he adds a little more paranormal or afterlife juice to the mix. Since the 2nd book of the series is due to be released soon I am curious to see if he has picked it up a notch. The narrative of Probability of Angels itself is unique and I like the writing style of Devon. If you like your fiction with a mix of the unknown then you can truly enjoy this book and this series.
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