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Promises - Promises Linger

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This is my first book by Sarah McCarty and it won't be my last. I'd heard really good things about her books and finally decided to give her a try. The uninitiated should understand that this is an erotic romance (which seemed to be a problem for some reviewers) so explicit language and sex are to be expected. But there's also a wonderful alpha hero and a nice supporting storyline to go along. I'm not a big reader of western romances but I really enjoyed this one set in 1868 Wyoming Territory.

Elizabeth Coyote, desperate to hang onto the family ranch after her father's death, offers a deal to gunslinger Asa MacIntyre. He promises to do all he can to bring the ranch back from the brink of bankruptcy and in exchange she will become his wife. Given his ruthless reputation and his imposing physical presence, Elizabeth feels certain he is the man to keep her home solvent and protected, surely to thrive in future. While she's comfortable with her choice for the ranch's sake, she's worried for her own. For Asa is unlike any man she's ever met. He's incredibly handsome and sexy, but more than that, he treats her differently from any other man in her life. He's supportive of her decisions (at least when he agrees with them), he respects her intelligence and he seems to, well like her! Elizabeth is confused by his smiles and teasing ways. What is she to make of him? Why can't he be like other men, at least then she would know what to expect. At the same time, she's very glad he's not like other men especially when he smiles or looks at her that special way.

Little does Elizabeth know, but she has just handed Asa MacIntyre everything he's ever wanted. A respectable life and a respectable lady for a wife. Being the son of a prostitute and an unknown father, Asa craves respectability and stability. The ranch is more than he could ever have dreamed of and Elizabeth, well she's just the icing on the cake. She's lovely but skittish, prickly but he thinks he glimpses a fire in her that he plans to bring to the surface. He sets about seducing his wife and working to determine if the ranch is being sabotaged, and if so, by whom. The more he is with her the deeper he falls, but the more he looks at the ranch's books, he wonders if he will be able to save her beloved ranch. Will she still want him if he fails?

For me, Asa was the best part of this book. He's wryly funny, sexy, sweet and protective and I loved how he often used reversed psychology to help her shed her fears and inhibitions. Elizabeth was a bit more problematic for me. Dominated by the men in her life - her brutal father and her patronizing friend and neighbor Aaron - her resistance to Asa was understandable but frustrating. Though she is rankled by male domination, she also wishes that Asa would be the typical male - at least then she'd know where she stood - which was contradictory and a bit annoying to me. Asa was so obviously a nice guy and he proved it many times over that her doubts seemed to stick with her a little too long.

If you like your romances hot but semi-sweet, this one may be for you.

Being a newcomer to Sarah McCarty's books, I took all the positive reviews on her books with a grain of salt, having been mislead by such reviews on other books in the past. However, the story sounded much too interesting to me, even though I am not a fan of western romances, to pass up. The price almost deterred me too, but I was more than happy that I'd purchased it once I started reading.

Elizabeth Coyote is in danger of losing her family's ranch. Taking the advice of her friend Aaron, she marries (or she thinks she marries) Brent Doyle, a nice enough looking fellow she believes will pull her ranch out of bankruptcy danger. It only takes her one night to see that he's not the man for her (abusive fists have a away of doing that). She confronts him the day after their farce of a wedding to reclaim money he stole from her and to give him the boot, which he naturally does not take kindly to (picture a big stupid man that thinks all women are stupid). When things begin to get a little out of hand in the saloon, Asa MacIntyre comes to her rescue (picture a tall, lean and gorgeous bounty hunter with a soft spot for abused women and children), and steps in as the new man in her life. After ripping Brent a new one, he and Elizabeth tie the knot (for real this time) and forge ahead with an awkward relationship. Asa has dreamed his whole life of a respectable wife and home (his mother was a prostitute, his father was a customer) and he sees Elizabeth as his one chance to deliver that unspoken promise. Elizabeth was raised by a loving mother that was tragically killed and a father that never understood how to raise a daughter. To say they each have their hang-ups is an understatement. Asa is determined though to have a complete marriage, and he gives Elizabeth no mercy in trying to achieve that goal. His patience and understanding know no bounds, despite his wife's determination to keep their marriage as business-like as possible. Asa pursues her with enough gusto to make any woman's heart pitter-patter (I know mine did). Not only does Asa care deeply for Elizabeth, but he is just what she needs to uncover why the ranch is being deliberately run aground and who's behind it.

The characters, especially Asa and Elizabeth, were so interesting and believable. Elizabeth's attitude at times was frustrating to read through, but I came to understand the reasons for her behavior as the book took shape. Asa is a man any woman would be lucky to have, but he needed a strong woman like Elizabeth to be able to hold him. The dynamic between the two of them was just amazing and so much fun to read about. I've rarely felt that kind of chemistry between two lead characters before. The secondary characters were just as well developed and readers will get a glimpse of the two heroes, Clint and Cougar, of McCarty's next two books in the series, both of whom promise to be just as hunky and mouth-watering as Asa.

The thing that really made this book unique to me was Asa. Imagine a man that is reasonable and knows how to communicate with his partner. I know - it's an amazing concept! It's so rare to find that type of man in the real world, let alone in a romance book. I could have died and gone to romance heaven as soon as he entered the story. He was so caring, sensitive and just "there" in every way for his wife. The intimate scenes were some of the best I've ever read, either in regular romance or erotica. I have an all new appreciation for horseback riding, if you know what I mean. Read the book to see what I mean on that one. It's scorching to say the least!

I'll definitely be purchasing the rest of the series in the very near future. Pick up "Promises Linger" by Sarah McCarty - you will love it. It's going on my keeper shelf as I will definitely be rereading it later.

Elizabeth Coyote will do anything to save the ranch that has been in her family for generations. After marrying a man that beats her on her wedding night, Elizabeth knows she has to take drastic action. Confronting the man in the town saloon may not have been one of her best ideas, but Elizabeth was desperate. The only thing she was thankful for was that the marriage wasn't consummated, so it wasn't considered legal. She soon sets her sights on another man whom she feels will be better for her and for the ranch.

Asa MacIntyre has always wanted the respectability that came with having a lady for a wife. Knowing that this may be his big chance, Asa can't turn down Elizabeth's offer. When he soon finds himself falling for his wife, Asa counts that as a lucky bonus. Soon he is fighting to keep the ranch that his wife so loves and with a jealousy that is foreign to his nature.

Promises Linger is an amazing book. Taking place in Wyoming in 1868, you can just feel the helplessness that Elizabeth feels while trying to save her ranch. Trying to overcome a terrible tragedy in her childhood, Elizabeth wants nothing more than to have her husband care about her the same way she cares about him. The relationship that develops between these two is truly heart warming. A marriage of convenience soon turns into so much more. Prissy Elizabeth finds herself matched up to a man that is more than capable of taking care of her and their ranch. I did dislike something about the ending, but don't want to give it away. It just didn't seem to fit.

I am looking forward to reading the next books in the series!

Sarah combines vivid descriptions of the old west and complex characterization that will keep you glued to your seat until you finish this book.
The passion Asa and Elizabeth share just sizzles off the pages. Asa is an alpha male that has a heart of gold and wants nothing more than to love his wife and protect his own. Through humor, compromise and constant communication Asa and Elizabeth never give up trying to make it work. You watch two people who start off as strangers working towards a common goal to save the Rocking C and by the end of the book they discover that they are soul mates.
You won't find weak heroines or Alpha males that you want to scream, in Sarah's books. Her Alpha's make you weak in the knees and she creates realistic heroines that you can relate to. I urge you to give this author a try! You won't be disappointed!

Sarah McCarty is definitely an author to keep your eyes on! Her characters are alive and vibrant and step right into the room with you as you read. I've never been a real fan of historical romance, and particularly set in the old west; however, I was converted as I read Promises Linger.

Sarah McCarty is truly an amazing talent. Her characters are perfectly drawn, in depth, and full of life. Each and every one of her books shows a depth of thought, execution and attention to detail that many authors attempt to reach but never do. Take a chance on Promises Linger or any of Sarah's novels, and you'll be gratified by the haunting storylines, vivid description and exceptional characterization.

Denise A. Agnew
author of DEEP IS THE NIGHT: DARK FIRE
www.deniseagnew.com

If you want to read a story that is HOT and mixed with tenderness and emotion, you've found what you've been looking for. Sarah McCarty is an excellent author who has an extraordinary talent for creating irresistibly sexy Alpha males and pairing them up with their perfect woman. This was my first book from Sarah McCarty, but I went on to read the next title in the "Promises" series, Promises Keep which was also a keeper! I'm impatiently waiting for Sarah's next book!

What a way to get hooked back into a historical! I couldn't help but fall for the hero, Asa. And I loved how the relationship developed between Elizabeth and Asa. With this book Sarah McCarty has hit my auto-buy list!

I thoroughly enjoyed this book. The characters came alive; they were so real to me. Asa was so hot. He was strong, caring, and completely devoted to Elizabeth. The love scenes were the hottest ones I have read yet. He helped Elizabeth learn to trust a man and learn to accept tenderness from one as well. She gave him the security and family life he had always dreamed of. This book is definitely not to be missed.

If you are looking for a HOT Alpha cowboy hero,who's aslo a romantic,then look no farther!Asa MacIntyre is the hero for you. I just loved this book! Elizebeth Coyote marries silver eyed Asa to save her ranch.Asa wants a ranch of his own and they both get a whole lot more from eachother.I love Alpha heros and the fact that Asa can be gentle and romantic just make this one that much better! Promises Linger is my first book by Sarah McCarty and it definitely won't be the last!