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20 of 21 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Nothing "Pure" about this story...,
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This review is from: Pure (Paperback)
In a nutshell: Pure is the story of a 14-year-old girl who makes very bad decisions. That's really all I can say about this book. And while I didn't dislike the story itself, I wasn't in love with it either. The prose was a little stressful at times and did not make for an entirely pleasurable experience. However, I believe Pure is quite an accomplishment for young author Rebbecca Ray, and she deserves much praise for this effort.The narrator (never does give a name) starts out as your basic trying-to-fit-in high school teenager. Of course, her game -- allowing boys to feel her up -- is less than admirable. So begins the story of Pure, a bumbling, tedious, and never funny jaunt through the troubled mind of a girl who craves attention in the most unhealthy way. As for the surrounding story lines with the narrator's embarrassing, awkward friend, Dawn, who becomes increasingly obsessed with her, and the relationship between Philip and Liz, the narrator's parents, who seem to have some problems of their own, I felt the author could have explored their stories more and closed up some of the gaps. I was drawn into the story, but the writing was too descriptive for my taste. There were times when I read this book like it was my favorite, but there were also times when I was just plain tired of it. Pure is definitely one novel that teeters the fence. Also, by including more about the supporting characters and the reasons behind their actions, I believe Pure could have been more of a well-rounded novel. But I will be keeping my eye out for the next Rebbecca Ray book -- with maturity and experience under her belt, I'm sure the next one will be worth it.
16 of 17 people found the following review helpful:
1.0 out of 5 stars
Pure Shlock,
By Riese "is too punk for you" (oakland, CA) - See all my reviews
This review is from: Pure (Paperback)
I generally don't enjoy reading books with teenaged legs and sunflowers on the cover. I often read on the subway, and it can be a bit embarassing. If I chose to weather the pornographic implications of such cover art, I expect to be rewarded for my sacrifice--with, say--A GOOD BOOK. I'd even settle for full characters who change and grow. I'd settle for dialogue that occasionally rose above tediousness and pointlessness--perhaps dialogue that, in fact, advanced the plot or advanced character development. If I am going to sit on the L train with a book that slightly resembles a Baby-Sitters Club Epic, I would like for that book to be enriching/rewarding/entertaining/redeeming. Why is this book 400 pages long??!!!! Nothing happens. The family has the same conversations over and over again, and nothing ever changes, and the father character is so irresponsibly designed that his dialogue is virtually identical to that of her 31-year-old boyfriend, Oliver. No one comes alive, except maybe the mother. I found almost nothing to hold on to in the entire novel. The opening line was intriguing. From there on out, it becomes progressively worse. I felt only for one person: the mother. Because she sat in the background, hands folded meekly, kind of depressed and annoyed, for the entire book. Which was a lot like how RR made me feel, too.
14 of 16 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Not entirely satisfying,
By Jenny "redbobsled" (Los Angeles, CA) - See all my reviews
This review is from: Pure (Paperback)
I think most would agree that this book will hold your attention throughout. It's certainly an involving read, but it has some problems. First of all, I don't think (contradictory to what other reviewers have said) that this book is written poetically at all. I think it's an admirable first book for such a young author, but she certainly has much room for improvement. Her characterizations were quite shallow and much was left unexplored. Why would any parents (no matter how consumed with their own problems they might be) allow their 14 year old daughter to carry on an obviously sexual relationship with a 31 year old man? In their own house? We aren't talking about parents who are out of the house at all hours working multiple jobs/drinking/engaging in illicit activities. These are middle class parents with a stay at home mother. Not believeable. There are other issues left unexplored, which, if explored, would have made for a much richer novel. What was Oliver's (the 31 year old boyfriend) motivation for entering into a relationship with a 14 year old. We get glimpses, but ultimately, his characterization is shallow. What about the relationship between the father and Dawn, the gangly friend of the narrator? What about the ongoing war between the parents for their daughter's affections? If the author had spent a bit more time developing her characters and less time with the play-by-play, the novel would be deeper. We should somehow at least sympathize with the protagonist here. However, we cannot fully do so. So many of her actions are inexplicable. The author may have it all laid out in her mind, but there are too many gaps here. I'm not saying authors should lay out everything in black and white, but I do feel that fleshing out characters is necessary. Ultimately, an interesting read, but it may leave you unsatisfied.
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