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Moore's Work Enlightens, Deserves Wider Audience, August 19, 2009
This review is from: Ramblings Through The Attic Of Thought (Paperback)
E. Joyce Moore is one of my favorite writers, from essays to poetry, her missives tend to be heartfelt, yet analytical. Her poetry tome, Ramblings Through The Attic Of Thought , is no exception. This a poignant potpourri of poetic style and musings, from haiku to hip-hop; covering subjects ranging from broken hearts to the state of black America. Moore fires at the reader from point-blank range.
In After The Storm, Moore pens:
strange though, somewhere deep inside mea tiny flame of relief burns brightI am still alone, just by myself.framed no longer, I am set freeI open myself to life's sunlightno more a pretty painting on someone's shelf.
Predefinition offers us another blunt look at race relations through Ms. Moore's eyes:
I look past you, You look past me / If we looked at each other What would we see? / Would you see the kindness / In my eyes Would your sense of humor / Take me by surprise? / What would happen / If we didn't assume / or define each other / And chose to make room For the truth.
Moore elaborates on aberrant behavior, which today's youth pass off as hip, from hop-hop hoochies to this piece about "saggin'":
Pull yo' pants up Brotha / / The look is passé / Spread the word / In case no one has heard...And looks bad anyway... When you don't / Even know why / Your belt loops' At your thigh / No, you don't even / Know why It means / You're a jail ho'
Moore's work makes the reader think, and her imagery is strak. I would rather see young people reading her work and becoming enlightened, than reading the popular schlock that today passes as Afro-american "literature."
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Moving collection!, June 3, 2009
Joyce,
You work the written page like a canvas and your words are filled with the color of life.
Your thoughts are on point and provoking. I found myself wandering through my own "Attic" of experience and remembrance. Very soul searching.
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Ramblings Through the Attic of Thought, December 5, 2008
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Joyce,
Your creative genius is evident in the title itself. This book has great promise.
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