From Publishers Weekly
Six-year-old Lana Franklin, narrator of this insightful, affecting first novel, lives with her older sister Abbie and their warring, unstable parents in Windfall, Ind. Their incessantly unsatisfied mother Ruth threatens to divorce their father Floyd, a WWII vet, who obsesses over the house catching fire, accuses Ruth of seeing other men and begins to sexually abuse Lana. Lana and Abbie invent a game called "The Old Man's Gone for Good," and imagine ways their father might die; a car accident with a reckless driver becomes a favorite scenario. The driving theme recurs five years later at the novel's resolution. Vice generally sustains Lana's tone throughout, only occasionally slipping from childish remarks ("She's got what you call pee-neumonia") to reflections that are more poetic ("pants and shirts hang stiff with ice... bare tree branches look like fingers scratching the blue sky"). Lana's confusion, her dread of her father and her need for his love are effectively and pointedly portrayed. Less successful are the interspersed third-person chapters chronicling Floyd's growing irrationality. Instances of obvious foreshadowing and awkward pacing aside, Vice's debut announces a singular and clear-toned voice.
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From Library Journal
Life in rural Indiana, circa the 1960s, is depicted in a series of short narratives in this first novel. In spare but effective prose, Vice tells of a family in the process of self destructing. She provides a perceptive glimpse into the mind of Lloyd, an abusive father in danger of losing his flimsy hold on reality. Through a series of short narratives, Lana, the youngest daughter, provides a convincing look at a family under stress. Throughout this compulsively readable story, the inner workings of Lloyd's mind are presented in discrete passages. The underlying chaos and violence of the characters' daily existence are clearly and effectively brought forth in the author's succinct writing style. Recommended for all fiction collections.?Erna Chamberlain, SUNY at Binghamton Libs.
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