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41 of 46 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
A very incomplete book, October 3, 2009
This review is from: The Renegade Hunter: A Rogue Hunter Novel (Argeneau Rogue Hunter 3) (Mass Market Paperback)
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This book is a very weirdly plotted book-and honestly may be the one that makes me stop reading her vampire books. Nicholas, one of the Argeneau vampires believes he killed a pregnant woman shortly after his lifemate died in a tragic accident 50 years ago. He's been on the run from the vampire council while hunting rogue vampires ever since. He chases Ernie, a rogue vampire, to just outside of a party at the Hunter's compound where Josephine (mortal) is a guest. He saves Josephine from Ernie and discovers that they are lifemates.
The story then descends into the normal Lynsay Sands "the couple can't get together too soon" sex that isn't sex-i.e.; they are interrupted while kissing, while having dream sex, phones ring, etc. Honestly I've seen it before from her too many times. I probably would have given up on the book if I hadn't been stuck on a bus with nothing else to read. I used to find this part of the story fun, but this time if felt like she'd cut and pasted scenes from previous books.
And then, on page 214 we get a plot. In about 150 pages Nicholas confesses the crime he "committed." While Sam (the lawyer from Rouge Hunter and Joanne's sister) couldn't lawyer her way out of a paper bag, Jo is able to see that Nicholas didn't kill the woman, his memory has been wiped, and that he was set up for something his dead lifemate was about to tell him. What's more, after Josephine gets hurt and Nicholas is forced to turn her into an immortal, she manages to convince the Hunters and Lucian that Nicholas might be innocent and that they need to investigate further.
And then the story almost literally stops. Nicholas and Jo are locked together in a cell with a double bed, some furniture and privacy while everyone else conducts the investigation. Weeks later Nicholas and Jo are released and told "he's innocent." End of story, and I mean that literally. The book ends there. We don't know who committed the murders or why. Now it's pretty clear that Lynsay Sands is going to tell that story in another book, but come on... I bought *this* book-and I feel like my $7.99 deserved a plot resolution.
So that's it. 1/2 a book that is formulaic at best, with what felt like cut and pasted sex scenes, 1/2 a book that is a decently paced mystery and no ending. Honestly I wish I'd reread Single White Vampire, Tall Dark and Hungry or Bite Me If You Can instead. They were better written and I enjoyed them a heck of a lot more.
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10 of 11 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
Seriously, where is the ending?, December 31, 2009
This review is from: The Renegade Hunter: A Rogue Hunter Novel (Argeneau Rogue Hunter 3) (Mass Market Paperback)
As an avid reader of Lynsay Sands' Argeneau series, I have generally looked forward to every new book, but after The Immortal Hunter and now The Renegade Hunter I may be taking my reading elsewhere.
The Immortal Hunter was a terribly boring and flat book, but that would be a different review. The Renegade Hunter picks up where that book left off, continuing the story of Nicholas, the rogue.
While I thoroughly enjoyed Jo's personality (and found it refreshing after so many 'professional' types that were used in many of the books beforehand) I felt cheated as the story unfolded.
There are a ton of unresolved plots from the previous book and then even more are added into this one. What made this book horrid, instead of disappointing was the ending. There is none. It's like the author just decided "Eh, that's enough" and sent it on its way. At least in the first book there was mention of the second book coming to wrap up some of the loose ends (which it doesn't). This one just... stops.
Also, the idea of Enforcers (vampire cops) that are supposedly amazing at their jobs yet can't keep a mortal female in a room or house let alone NOT let the bad guy in after them is getting tiresome. Apparently they should all be fired because they fail at their jobs? This is a running theme and it happens a lot and it's quite stupid at this point.
There are also several inconsistencies between books. Example: The first once says that the child of an immortal and a no-fanger has a one in three chance of being a sane no-fanger, a crazy no-fanger or stillborn. It also mentioned that the villain would take immortal women and use them to father his sons (who are all no-fangers in the first book). Yet when we get to the second book, one of his sons (an immortal, not a no-fanger) says the child will always be what the mother is. So if the mother is immortal, the child will be too.
Wait, what? But in the first book you said.... (You see my point :p)
Either Ms. Sands' has decided all her readers are bumbling ninnies that are only interested in the "hot and steamy (and now lacking, repetitive) romantic scenes" or she's really lost her touch as an author.
Don't buy these three books. I don't believe there is any chance whatsoever that a fourth would save this little series nor would any reader be willing to take the chance after the first two failures.
The Rogue Hunter : 2/5 stars
The Immortal Hunter : 0/5 stars
The Renegade Hunter : 2/5 stars (a half for Jo who was slightly refreshing, a half for the dog and one for the hilarious Lucian/Jo confrontation towards the end)
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8 of 9 people found the following review helpful:
4.0 out of 5 stars
Read the book. its very good., December 9, 2009
This review is from: The Renegade Hunter: A Rogue Hunter Novel (Argeneau Rogue Hunter 3) (Mass Market Paperback)
ok. there are a lot of people giving this book a thumbs down. forget about them. all that, "the story doesn't have an ending..its not believable" crap is just that, crap. duh, whats believable about a story about immortals from Atlantis with nanos keeping them forever young but needing to drink blood with fangs. nicholas is a rogue, but he didn't do what they accuse him of doing. he's acquitted, but we dont know how until a future book. um, hello...thomas and inez's story? yeah, that went unfinished too, but everyone loves that book. and jo figuring out thomas has either false memories or was drugged isn't so far fetched. people believe weird crap all the time without proof, going off gut instincts. called faith. wouldn't you tend to believe your loved one, someone you're having super awesome sex with, isn't a vicious killer, too? doesn't matter if he did it or not, she doesn't really know he didn't do it, she has faith he didn't do it. i wont blow then ending, like some of the people who wrote reviews, but we know he is innocent but the author didn't tell us why, yet. i thought this book was great and stayed true to all her vampire books. the characters were funny and sexy, the bad guy was somewhat believable, though i think its dumb how easy he got to jo...3 times. you find out a little bit about the bad guy from the last book, who the female was that carried him off in the end and more about mortimor and sam. you also see characters from the older books and it was nice finding out what has been happening with them. she also gives clues to her next books, hopefully thomas, nicholas and jean louise's (or whatever her name is) father will finally make an appearance. read it, you'll like it, unless you're one of those people that can't deal with delayed gratification. its not that important to know how nicholas got off, just that he and jo live happily ever after. the end.
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