I liked the premise of this story a lot. A lot. So many short stories, like the ones you read in the New Yorker, are about nothing. Absolutely nothing. Nothing interesting or new or fresh. This story was about something. I loved that the terrorist was called the stork, perfect. I loved the story about Tim and Suzanne and the reality TV show. I loved the musician and the benefit and the description about how all the initial public goodwill slowly receded away. The only critique I have is that the execution in certain parts of the story needs some work. There were parts that had dialogue, i.e the first scene with Buzz, Fiona, and the protagonist, where it was difficult to discern where they were or who was speaking. Additionally, I felt that the progression about the suit and the final reveal could have been done a little better, I felt like it happened too quickly and was a little rushed. There are also some formatting issues. That being said, all in all, I really enjoyed your story! Very imaginative.