Rim: A Novel of Virtual Reality [Paperback]

Alexander Besher (Author)

Book Description

Publication Date: March 1996

It's 2027. Satori Corporation, the owner of a virtual reality entertainment empire, is embroiled in cutthroat corporate warfare to preserve its market share, and, save the lives of thousands of users trapped inside its virtual worlds. All of this seems far away to professor Frank Gobi--until he gets home to find his son stuck inside Satori's virtual Gametime.

Editorial Reviews

From Publishers Weekly

Journalist/editor Besher's first novel, falling somewhere among cyberpunk, Douglas Adams and "Buckaroo Banzai," has all the normal faults of amateurism and invents some of its own. Frank Gobi, professor of "transcultural corporate anthropology and organizational shamanism," a former "consciousness detective," is called in when Satori City, or "Virtualopolis," an online burg the size of Manhattan, crashes, stranding thousands of users, including Gobi's teenage son, Trevor. Behind the crash are the shenanigans of two Japanese megacorporations struggling over a Tibetan program, "Tantrix," that could make all of reality virtual. Gobi enters into virtuality to triumph over a virus that takes the form of Tibetan zombies and make the world safe for unreality. Along the way are irritating shifts in point of view, seemingly important characters who vanish, characters-including Gobi-who remain blanks, forced exposition, stilted dialogue, cliches, addled construction, and adolescent sexism. Frequent jokey uses of religious/mystical concepts, while sometimes adroit, are more often sheer gibberish. Besher has not given us a world in which mystical powers and high-tech/cyberscience can co-exist, never mind interact, and there is no internal logic here; Gobi does one impossible thing after another. Besher is clever, but this garbled, maladroit fiction remains a virtual novel at best.
Copyright 1994 Reed Business Information, Inc. --This text refers to an out of print or unavailable edition of this title.

From Library Journal

A savage corporate war results in the crash of the world's largest recreational virtual reality environment, stranding thousands of users in neural limbo. Dr. Frank Gobi, an experimenter on the fringe of psychic downloading, races against time to track down a rogue CEO and restore the system before the minds of those trapped inside are lost beyond recall. The author of The Pacific Rim Almanac (LJ 6/1/91) has envisioned a 21st century that will be born from the pairing of technological advances with Eastern mysticism. Sparkling prose, inventive plotting, and an engagingly self-deprecatory hero combine to produce a compelling sf thriller of the next century. A strong addition to sf collections.
Copyright 1994 Reed Business Information, Inc. --This text refers to an out of print or unavailable edition of this title.

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Product Details

• Paperback
• Publisher: Harpercollins (Mm); Reprint edition (March 1996)
• Language: English
• ISBN-10: 0061056693
• ISBN-13: 978-0061056697
• Product Dimensions: 6.6 x 4.2 x 0.8 inches
• Shipping Weight: 5.6 ounces
• Average Customer Review: 3.0 out of 5 stars  See all reviews (10 customer reviews)
• Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #3,838,280 in Books (See Top 100 in Books)

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13 of 14 people found the following review helpful:

1.0 out of 5 stars Somewhat interesting ideas, terrible writing, July 12, 2002

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Besher's ideas are interesting. Take Johnny Mnemonic or Snowcrash and add in a great deal of Buddhist spirituality and a bit of Chinese medicine.

However, the writing is absolutely, Bulwer-Lytton contest awful.

Some examples: "His hands caressed the globes of her derriere," "Their feet touched, and they smiled," "His finger traced the slippery third rail of her shaven..." well, you get the idea.

Besher has no ear for dialog, and the prose is what you would expect from a senior high school student in the first week of creative writing.

Mr. Besher, you have a lot of promise. Please, take a year to practice writing with a good teacher. Your stories will benefit greatly, and your readers will be able to experience your ideas more clearly and pleasantly.

For readers who would like similar stories, but with better writing, check out Snow Crash by Neal Stephenson or almost anything from William Gibson.

5 of 5 people found the following review helpful:

1.0 out of 5 stars Seems to be loved or hated..., August 23, 2005

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This review is from: Rim: A Novel of Virtual Reality (Paperback)

This novel is a first one for Alexander Besher, one in which he explores a lot of new ideas, using cyber-punk (or cyber-noir or cyber-fantasy), as the delivery system. Now, I have books that have forced me to look at the universe in different ways. The Hitchhiker series and the Illuminatus! trilogy (which I think did some brain damage) are great examples.
This is not a great example. The plot-idea is that part of the VR world is in danger of crashing and taking a lot of people with it (including the main character's son). But the book seems to start off slowly, some parts don't seem to make sense or click into place till you're halfway thru and tons of the novel seems to be tencho-babble. In fact, some parts seem to be just plain made up on the spot. I know reviewers sometimes say that, but in this case I mean it. It has sci-fi stuff and, yes, Japanese businessmen and gangsters and VR and drugs and space stations - I'm sure William Gibson would be very proud. But I happen to NOT like Mr. Gibson's style (and his work at least had some logic to it).
Add Chi and zombies and a main character who can do anything (and get the girls) and it seems more like the wishful thinking of a 90's geek high on Jolt or no-doze.
What scares me is he wrote a series of this books!

5 of 5 people found the following review helpful:

2.0 out of 5 stars William Gibson he is not., August 14, 1997

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I read this book over a year ago, and remember being extremely disappointed by it at the time.
As cyber-fiction goes it was average, but the most lasting impression (on me anyway) was the poor quality of the writing. I seem to remember having to put it down several times as a result of some extremely prosaic or downright cliched paragraphs.
Now, if I had to say something positive to conclude, it would have to be "Read Excession by Iain M. Banks"; That is genuinely original.