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31 of 35 people found the following review helpful
on October 18, 2013
It's really rare that I can't find a single redeeming quality in a book. Usually there's something. This book was so awful that I don't know where to start. But I'll try.

The writing: I've never read worse writing. The author doesn't even know how to put together a grammatically correct sentence. She doesn't seem to know the difference between their, they're and there; or to, too and two. Don't even get me started on the difference between between using I versus me. The writing was awful! My 3rd grader could write better and probably has.

The characters: Awful. There was nothing likable about any of the characters. In fact, I ended the book hating both of them. Not just disliking them, HATING them.

The story: Beyond awful. I've read bad romance and erotic stories, but this was awful. This book came with a warning that some scenes would be difficult or offensive; but I don't think that warning is sufficient, so let me give you a better warning: This book comes with scenes of blatant rape where the victim is supposed to enjoy it??? Seriously??? I'm not offended by much, but I'm deeply offended by a rape scene where the victim has an internal battle with herself because she's enjoying it at the same time that she's saying the pain was excruciating and almost more than she can handle. An 18 year old homeless kid (which is what the main character is)...a virgin, no less...raped vaginally and anally by a 30-something year old man is not interesting reading in my mind.

The book ends with a cliffhanger. Seriously? Why in the world would anyone want to read more? I not only wish I could get my 99 cents back that I paid for this book, but I feel like charging the author for the couple of hours of time I will never be able to get back.

I'm going to do something I've never done. I'm going to recommend to all readers that they skip this book. If you like romance or erotica, there are a lot of much better choices out there. This is not one of them. I can't imagine anyone finding anything redeeming about this book, the story, the writing or the characters.
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7 of 7 people found the following review helpful
on October 17, 2013
The book ended with a cliffhanger. Need to know what happens. Cannot find the author on Google or Facebook!! How are we going to know when the next book comes out?? I follow authors on Facebook to find out when next books are coming out. I suggest author gets a FB paged to promote her book.
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4 of 4 people found the following review helpful
on October 31, 2013
Really loved the plot but BEWARE, although the sex is consensual, it's really rough and brutal to the point of being abusive(and graphic). I would not recommend this to those who are sensitive in regards to physically abusive relationships (way beyond BDSM). I felt like a big sicko for wanting to read more. The biggest minus for me was how it ended abruptly after a very dramatic scene. There were some typos, so for those that are part of the Literary Nazi Critique Brigade- THIS READ IS NOT FOR YOU.
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4 of 4 people found the following review helpful
on October 17, 2013
I took a chance on this book & found it quite intriguing. It was a little short and I wish it had answered a few more questions. Not for the faint of heart. Some may find the sex overly violent and harsh. I am anxious to see what happens next.
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6 of 7 people found the following review helpful
on October 23, 2013
I am not sure what I just read. An erotic story yes. A romance no. A rape story yes. I am all for rough sex but this was plain rape. Not cool.
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3 of 3 people found the following review helpful
on October 22, 2013
Spoiler--> I enjoyed the build up and was really looking forward to finding out how she will explain the bruises to her brother but the story just ended very abruptly. Looking forward to the next book. Can we get an eta?
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3 of 3 people found the following review helpful
on October 17, 2013
Overall book was not bad. There are parts that I was not keen on. the ending was a bit... Didn't like it. Book just stopped, not the best time.

Overall the series has potential.

For those who do not like certain graphic violence heed the warning in the synopsis.
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2 of 3 people found the following review helpful
on October 24, 2013
I would have loved to give this book more than two starts because it has so much potential and it kept me wanting to know more. I looked at some reviews where there was an indication of rape, but she had so many times to leave and yes he was rough too rough, but did we forget that she within info from Gabriel how can you not tell someone you are a virgin. I know her objective was to make it better for her and her brother but she seemed to keep forgetting that he existed from being mesmerized by all that is gabriel. Especially when she is still being buddy buddy with the girl tonya who she should have paid her what she owed her and kept a moving. she has already shown you all she cares about is the mighty dollar nothing more and nothing left. So now here we are and Gabriel has done the dead and we are left wondering what tomororw brings, but the book the author claims is out on amamzon doesnt claim to exist anywhere. The author doesnt seem to exist anywhere as well. I am feeling kind of mad at this author right now because I need book 2 and I need to be know when it is coming out.
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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful
on March 22, 2014
Awesome book...if only they would actually publish book #2 since the back of book one says it's already out, but I can't find it anywhere on Amazon!
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on June 15, 2014
To be honest I found this book a bit far fetched and jumpy, almost as if bits were missing, it's a very, very quick read but I suppose it is only half a book, I did feel as if potential was there but just never realised. So many times after reading a book I'm left thinking that it could be better and that's certainly the case here, I know it's short but I never connected with any of the characters, they didn't seem real or have any depth.
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