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4.0 out of 5 stars
4 1/2 stars Great riverboat erotic romance, July 27, 2005
I first discovered Ms Whiteside with her prior book, THE IRISH DEVIL which I enjoyed to a degree. THE RIVER DEVIL shows her growth as a writer and I enjoyed it very much. It's better than THE IRISH DEVIL IMO.
The first indication that Hal Lindsay's life is about to change comes when he rescues a stray dog from being beaten by some riverbank bullies. He intends to give the dog away, but the dog becomes so attached to him that he allows him to stay. Hal is not a man interested in emotional attachments, canine or human - they just wind up causing pain. Hal has had enough pain in his life, especially his difficult childhood and his relationship with his emotionally distant parents. While attending a poker game he becomes intrigued by fellow poker player Frank Carstairs. He looks familiar to Hal and the more he looks at Carstairs, the more he begins to suspect that he is actually a she. Long, elegant fingers, delicate features and not even a hint of a beard. And quite possibly this she is missing railroad heiress Rosalind Schuyler! Hmmm he may just need to get a closer look at "Carstairs" and find out for sure.
Rosalind Schuyler is on the run and hiding from Nicholas Lennox who is determined to marry her for her substantial fortune. She's seen first hand how cruel, violent and dangerous he can be and she is determined to hide from him until she comes into her fortune. But that's not until her 25th birthday some 15 months away! How can she keep hiding when he has Pinkerton detectives looking all over for her? First, she's dressed as man as she used to do with her brothers and father who taught her how to move like a man, play poker and shoot (unforunately they're all dead now). Second, she will avoid the railroads where Lennox will surely look for her. Instead she decides to travel by riverboat eventhough she has a very real fear of water (her mother and brothers drowned in a boating accident). Up to this point, no one has seen through her disguise - not until Hal Lindsay that is. Will this golden god of a man keep her secrets?
Hal agrees to hide her after they spend a steamy night getting acquainted so to speak! He hires her/Frank Carstairs on as his cub pilot and arranges for her/him to share his cabin (a cot is set up for her but quickly becomes his dog, Cicero's resting place!). Hal's sister Viola and her husband William Donovan (from TID) have joined Hal on this trip and it is nice to catch up with them. Unfortunately for Hal, his parents also show up unannounced. This makes things uncomfortable for all as Hal has a strained relationship with his parents and Viola is completely estranged. Those who read TID know that their mother Desdemona was a southern sympathizer who committed some treasonous acts of which neither Hal nor his father are aware (though Viola is). Well, we discover that's not all she's done and this book details her many transgressions and character flaws. We also find out that Hal was cruelly beaten by his father as a child resulting in his vow never to have children and pass that legacy along. But most importantly, we watch as Hal and Rosalind come together, first sexually, then professionally as she begins to learn the basics of piloting a riverboat and lastly emotionally as bonds, no matter how unwanted begin to form between them. Hal is impressed with her intelligence, her resourcefulness and her sensuality. Rosalind is smitten almost from the start admiring Hal's inherent goodness, fairness, smarts and obvious sex appeal. But what will happen at the end of this trip upriver? Will they part forever? Will Rosalind successfully elude Lennox?
I really enjoyed this book and I liked both Hal and Rosalind. The plot of this book had more depth and less emphasis on sex as her last book, though don't get me wrong, there's still plenty of steamy sex scenes to satisfy. The only things keeping this from 5 stars for me come down to personal taste. My eyes glazed over at times as the author details the navigation and workings of riverboats. I also found myself skimming the poker games which I found boring because I do not know how to play the game. But both those aspects also provide an authentic period atmosphere and the author's obvious love of the riverboat period and poker really comes through.
I highly recommend this book and look forward to Donovan friend and partner Morgan Evans' story THE SOUTHERN DEVIL due in 2006.
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16 of 18 people found the following review helpful:
4.0 out of 5 stars
Ms. Whiteside Delivers Again!, June 22, 2005
For Ms. Whiteside's latest effort we've left the west and have travelled to the mid-west. This story is set on the river...The mighty Mississippi and the Missouri rivers to be exact. Our hero is a river boat captain and he lives his life as he pleases doing what he wants when he wants. One night though is about to change the path that he has taken.
Rosalind Schuyler is on the run for her life. Nicholas Lennox will do what ever he has to do in order to insure that her wealth is his. Rosalinda can think of no worse fate in life so she dress as a man and heads out. She must stay "free" for 15 months and than her money is hers with no strings attached. She is soon running out of options and one night at a poker game she runs into Hal Lindsey and he is breath taking and handsome. To bad she's dressed as a man. Of course what she doesn't realize is that Hal sees through her disguise. He wants her and is going to have her. But for how long? Little do they know they share a enemy that will stop at nothing to get what he wants. Will they find a happy ending or will that be taken from them with help from close by?
This was another good read by a very talented author. Ms. Whiteside brings river life...well, to life. Hal and Rosalind are complex characters and their romance although fast and steamy was entertaining. William and Viola return for this story and it was fun to visit with them again. This is one read that I recommend and I look forward to reading Ms. Whiteside in the future.
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6 of 6 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Great cover - boring story, August 9, 2005
I find this book BORING! I've tried to force myself to keep going but my mind will start to wander and I'll find some excuse or another to set it down and do something else. I find that I don't care at all about the riverboat thing and I don't find either H&H all that compelling, can't really seem to care what happens to them. They're likeable characters well enough, they just don't have any kind of special spark that pulls me in, they fell flat for me. I thoroughly enjoyed The Irish Devil so I thought I was in for another terrific read but it just hasn't happened on my end.
I also find it odd that in 1872 this heroine is so casual about sex and not just willing but eager to jump into bed outside of marriage. That aspect of her character pulled me out of the story because it feels very contemporary rather than historical. There is an early line in there that just makes me go back and re-read it and think surely I must have read this wrong, the heroine (while in disguise) has just literally bumped into the hero's mother and is shocked to see her in this area, as she mulls this over in her mind -
**Could she have been visiting a lover given the streak of semen high on her cheek? Rosalind had brushed similar streaks from her skin, after private times with David.***
What?! The streak of semen high on her cheek?? Not only does that sound weird to me but I just can't wrap my mind around a heroine from this time period thinking or having a background of such a thing. Especially when she seems to have come from a wealthy up-bringing and all this experience is coming from her relationship with her previous fiancé who comes across as fairly prim and proper in what I read about him.
I thought the sex scenes in The Irish Devil were buring hot with excitement but with these two I found myself skimming..very ho hum.
I wouldn't recommend it for the trade size price, maybe at the most in paperback but this is one that is not a keeper for me. I give it three stars because the writing technically is good, smooth and professional - it's just what she's written that didn't pull me in.
The one plus I can say about it is that it was an awesome cover!
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