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4.0 out of 5 stars
Two decent cops in a really crooked city, July 23, 2009
This review is from: Rizzo's War (Hardcover)
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To begin with, this is not a thriller, it's a police procedural, what the French call a policier. It's a very good policier, but if you're waiting for the big scene, the one a young Schwarzenegger would star in, you're going to be sorely disappointed.
It focuses on two detectives, an older Italian cop (Joe) wise to the ways of the city, and a younger, idealistic Irish cop (Mike) just learning the ropes and wondering whether he should use his NYU degree elsewhere. Except for a few scenes with another cop, a pretty black lesbian policewoman, Joe and Mike are really the only characters we get to know, and following them around in their unmarked Impala pretty much makes up the action of the book.
There's lots of philosophizing by these two men in an action profession, but for a while that's OK. Manfredo seems to know how cops talk, and if you don't, you will by the time you finish this book. Unfortunately, Joe and Mike, especially Joe, talk too much. After a couple of hundred pages you really do wish they'd shut up and get on with it. Moreover, when another character comes along, especially another cop, he sounds awfully like Joe and Mike. Even the priests sound like cops. And they all do talk, and talk, and talk. There is very little action in this book.
But there is a good spirit hovering over it. Joe and Mike are decent men, two of the most decent you are likely to meet in a modern novel. Priscilla, the black policewoman, is decent too. Joe's wife is a wonderful wife and a perfect mother. The two priests are saintly, however rough their speech. There are bad people, to be sure. Corrupt cops, crooked politicians, nasty perps and an evil motorcycle gang. But, for all the cynical cop-talk, the author seems to believe in the essential goodness of mankind. The book leaves you with a nice aftertaste.
I do question one accusation against the Brooklyn political establishment. There is a scene where judgeships are bought for $50,000 each. That seems unrealistic to me. Many years ago, when I graduated from law school and lived in a different part of Brooklyn, I was told that $50,000 was the going price for a judgeship. Hasn't that figure been adjusted for inflation?
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9 of 12 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
a little editing could go a long way, August 11, 2009
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One of the most frustrating aspects of this book is that it could have been so much better.
The first 125 pages are not only irrelevant to the actual plot, they're badly done. The author takes us through the first few months of McQueen and Rizzo's partnership, showing us a lot of nitty gritty cop work, and telling us how close they've become. There are sentences like, "Over those few weeks he began to realize what a great cop Rizzo was." If the author had shown us the two cops learning to trust and respect each other, and told us about the cases they worked, it would have been a much better intro.
There are some irritations that continue through the entire book. I don't think their car was ever once referred to as 'the car'. It was always 'the grey Impala', 'the Chevrolet', 'the grey Chevrolet', and other similar permutations. Likewise, every time they start driving, the author felt it necessary to tell us how they slowly pull away from the curb. Detail is good, especially in a crime novel, but it goes a little too far.
The author is also seriously invested in making the reader utterly and completely convinced that the author knows Brooklyn. We're treated to, on occasion, turn-by-turn directions of where they're driving. It breaks the flow of the story, and is totally irrelevant. He also goes to great lengths to show how favors are earned and dispensed, far more than necessary to set up a few details later in the book.
And as much as the author goes out of his way to show us that he, a cop, knows the mechanics of police work, there are times where his characters say things to each other that i'm nearly sure would never pass the lips of an actual police detective talking to his partner. My favorite is, "We're going to see a friend of mine down at the State Supreme Court on Adams Street." (p51) I would bet a large sum of money that actual cops have some much simpler way of referring to the State Supreme Court on Adams Street. Once again, it breaks the narrative, but also breaks the characters a little.
Once you get to page 150 or so, the real plot is picking up steam, the characters are well established, and the pages fly by. But getting there is no minor feat. If not for the slog of the first 125 pages, i'd have given this book a solid 4 stars.
And lastly, i found the ending unsatisfying. It wasn't bad, it just wasn't what i wanted.
If this author writes another novel, i may well read it, because this one showed definite promise. I just wish the editor had been a little bolder.
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2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
The Impala Connection: A Story of Two Cops and their Adventures in an Unmarked Car, April 12, 2010
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Whenever one of my friends studying criminal justice comes over to my apartment and find Law and Order on my DVR, they cringe and give me the look of shame. "That is NOT how it is in real life!!" they would say and I would have to wrestle the remote out of their hands to prevent them from deleting my recordings of Law and Order and Desperate Housewives (I swear, what we record for our women). It is true that there is a gross amount of false preconceived notions about law enforcement due mostly in part to cop dramas and "bad science" passed around the mass media. This is commonly referred to as the "CSI effect."
In reality, however, the world of law enforcement is entirely different as it is filled more with bureaucracy, paperwork, interviews, and note taking than busting down doors. Rizzo's War focuses on this truer aspect more than anything else as the several discs of this set take place almost entirely during an investigation process... in the unmarked Chevrolet Impala to be precise.
Rizzo's War follows has the base formula of a standard cop-drama; two differing cops made partners. One is a veteran of the force (Rizzo) while the other is a rookie trying to find his place in the world (McQueen). They both wish to solve a crime but have two different ideas of how to do it. Unlike most cop-dramas, however, Rizzo's War takes the unique approach of presenting the story as a procedural piece rather than use action every now and again. What this means is that Rizzo's War is so precise on cop procedure that it lacks any real action or climax all the while showing procedure to the point of boredom.
Meanwhile, the story follows a very, VERY slow method of solving a sex crime. This version is the unabridged one and you know it as every single detail is spelled out in a way that would make Tom Clancy think his books are short and lack sufficient details. I fell asleep several times while trying to listen to the CDs. However, I think this was intentional as, again, this is a procedural account of law enforcement rather than a sensationalized cop-drama.
All in all, Rizzo's War had a lot of potential but, with a lacking amount of actual drama and a lot more car scenes with no actual climax... it just didn't quite do it in for me.
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