3.0 out of 5 stars
Series Veers Towards Average, October 17, 2011
The fourth book in the SEAL Team Seven series, it's abundantly clear
that this is the point where the series starts to be written by
authors other than the original Keith Douglass. This book is
especially clumsily written unfortunately. Don't get me wrong, once I
start a series, I always finish it, so there's no question I'll read
the rest. I just hope some or most are less implausible than
Firestorm.
First off, the plot is, as others have said, ridiculously far-fetched.
Believe it or not, I can suspend disbelief to an impressive extent,
but this book surpassed my limits. It was like the author thought of
something they wanted the SEALs to do (prevent a war! in China!) and
then kiiiind of worked backwards from there, but didn't want to put
too much effort into how the SEALs could possibly find themselves in
such a situation. The President sits in a room with two or three other
guys, and there's no talk of other alternatives to preventing the
possible war (such as diplomacy). It's just a foregone conclusion that
the SEALs will go in. They're already there, right?
Aside from that, the way the SEALs went about accomplishing their
multi-part mission didn't seem like it would work in any dimension.
After key parts of your defense/offense of your planned invasion start
randomly blowing up, you'd think China would start cottoning on to
what could be going on and upping security. Instead of swimming under
a patrol boat outside of one of their key military docks, the SEALs
decide to blow it up, not thinking that maybe it would alert the
Chinese to their presence?
Second, the book is really redundant in its technical descriptions. It
describes attack boards twice, M4/CAR-15 probably half a dozen times
(and then proceeds to use the two interchangeably for the rest of the
story), grenades as many times, Doc Ellsworth's shotgun three times,
their Motorola radios twice in detail. Of course we have to have the
blurb devoted to Hell Week that's like a legal requirement for
anything longer than a news article about SEALs.
Thirdly, there's an awkward and unnecessary flashback to a week or so
after the end of the last book. It serves no purpose except to briefly
touch on the status of some of the characters from the last book
(though you don't find out anything you didn't already know) and to
briefly introduce a few of the new guys to the platoon. Then there's a
weird training sequence where nothing happens.
A minor annoyance, too, was the language. There's not a lot of
dialogue that isn't directly relevant to the battle they're currently
engaged in, but when there is, someone is going to start a sentence
with 'h-e-double-hockey sticks' just to show what a good ol' boy he
is. I know in these types of books, the guys are always a little
exaggerated, but the dialogue seemed really forced. Like "'[Heck]
we're SEALs!' Everyone laughed uproariously."
I did miss the non-combat interaction of the platoon. In previous
books Murdock came across as a professional officer who could unwind
and loosen up, if appropriate. In this book he's more of a "Hey, I'm
just one of the guys" cliche. And otherwise, it was all action, which
would normally be a good thing. Except it was all "The SEALs did this.
Then they went over here and threw some grenades." There wasn't a lot
of interaction.
The positive is that it's a book about SEALs, which is always
enjoyable on some level, regardless of how far-fetched and redundant.
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