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2.0 out of 5 stars
Sabrina meets Pride and prejudice in Victorian England, October 1, 2008
This review is from: Secret Desires of a Gentleman (Mass Market Paperback)
This lastest installment of the Girl-Bachelor series though well-written and an easy read really missed the mark. I wish the end was more balanced to the beginning and middle because I felt robbed of a truly good love story at the end.
First, I did not like that 12 years had passed since Philip had sent the Maria away. (I guess all the girl bachelors have to be pushing 30) From a plot point of view, it bothered me because the way Philip was portrayed,it to seemed to me implausible that he would not have married during that time span. Second,the potential for the previous girl bachelors to meet, dish and advise Maria was wasted! I would have liked it better if Emma and Prudence would met at Marias shop and talked as the independent women they were, but no we had to go back to their old boarding house for tea and have the landlady, Mrs. Morris,lecture Maria on the importance of virtue and reputation. I felt the whole time I was reading this scene that the only reason for Maria to be there at tea was to introduce the reader to the next girl bachelor for the next book in the series. Third, the love story had such potential, but the time spent between the Philip and Maria as they were opening up, revealing their true feelings and admitting their love for each other was too brief. The author built up the story and in my opinion let me down with a final scene that I truly hated!!! *Spoiler Alert* in comments if your interested in why I hated the ending.
This book really disapointed me. I loved "And then he kissed her" the first Girl-Bachelor book. Emma and Harry were such great characters, the story was fresh and plot held my attention. The second book in the series. Wicked ways of a Duke was subpar.I have yet to read the whole thing though I read parts of it and the end because it could not keep my interest. I hope that Laura Lee Gurke gives us something new in the next book in the series and gets away from the aristoracy, please champion a captain of industry or a Military officer for god sakes. I will have a hard time believing if the next book follows the formula of the first three books that four women from Mrs. Morris boarding house would all marry into the aristoracy. If that is the case Mrs. morris will be a rich women because she will be able to charge whatever rent she wants because girls be flocking to her door since her establishment seems to be the hot spot in London to marry and aristocrat!
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15 of 20 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
Ugh! Terrible ending . . ., October 4, 2008
This review is from: Secret Desires of a Gentleman (Mass Market Paperback)
I am a fan of Laura Lee Guhrke's "Girl Bachelor" series. I especially liked "And Then He Kissed Her," due in no small part to the heroine, Emma Dove. She was an independent, talented woman who was very likable. The hero, Harry, was likable too while still being very much an alpha. I also liked Guhrke's writing style, which was fun, breezy, and kept the story moving. So I was very surprised by this book, because I found it extremely difficult to like either of the lead characters, and I didn't particularly care for the story.
SPOILER ALERT:
Maria is supposed to be one of the finest pastry chefs in Europe. Her father was once the chef to the "hero," Phillip. Because Maria is the daughter of the help, Phillip cannot get over the difference in their social positions, and treats Maria shabbily throughout almost the entire book. There is no heat or chemistry between them; when he grabs her and kisses her, then later basically attacks her in a carriage, it seemed to make no sense. They really don't seem to like each other very much, and it's not the kind of "they don't like each other but there is a lot of tension building" fun sort of plot you might expect.
Perhaps the most egregious part of the book is the ending. Phillip proposes to her in front of a whole roomful of people at a dinner. This might have been romantic, but somehow I just kept wishing it would end. It felt stilted and embarrassing and completely implausible. And then there is the matter of Maria's greatest joy in life, which is supposed to be cooking. She is a marvelous pastry chef, as previously mentioned, and her lifelong dream is to have her own pastry shop. She finally achieves this at the beginning of the book, and chapter after chapter we are reminded of her love of and dedication to her job, which is really her passion. After Phillip proposes, Maria decides, in one sentence, to give it all up! Again, this didn't feel real or authentic to the character.
Guhrke is a good writer, so her vivid descriptions and excellent secondary characters (especially Lawrence, the younger and much more appealing brother) earn this book two stars. But the lead characters and story just seem "off." A disappointing entry in an otherwise good series.
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2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
A mixed bag, November 26, 2008
This review is from: Secret Desires of a Gentleman (Mass Market Paperback)
I've said before that I love Laura Lee Guhrke's work so it pains me to give one of her creations anything less than 5 stars. However, if I'm perfectly fair I have to. This book has a lot of good points, but the not so great points seem to overpower them at times.
I thought at first it was going to be another homerun for Ms. Guhrke, but it soon became clear that it had problems. One of which was the attitude of the hero. Yes, he changes his tune in time, but he spends quite a bit of the book pontificating on how he is so much more superior than our lowly pastry chef heroine. And while that is true from society's perspective, considering their history it makes him seem uncaring, snobbish and sometimes downright mean. It would have been nice to see him show a little more appreciation for his 'true north'.
In some ways it was refreshing seeing him come to realize that he had always been in love with Maria, the chef's daughter, but it took just a little too long for him to realize it. For her part, I really liked Maria, except for those 3 or 4 times when she sounded like a card carrying suffragette. The 'you must respect me, I'm an independent woman' routine didn't seem appropriate for the time period and made her seem a little unreasonable. Not that Phillip helped anything with his stark proclamations and demands.
But it was all interesting enough that I might have gotten over all that if the ending hadn't been so rushed. It could have used another chapter or an epilogue at the very least. I was not crazy about the public make-up scene either. Totally out of character for the straightlaced Marquess of Hawthorne. I'm sure that was intentional to show us how much he had changed and how much he loved Maria after all, but it didn't ring true to me.
Not the worst book I've read, but it could have been better.
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