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The Severing Kiss (The Corvus Cycle Book 1) Kindle Edition

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Length: 439 pages Series: The Corvus Cycle (Book 1)

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  • File Size: 1008 KB
  • Print Length: 439 pages
  • Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
  • Publication Date: November 20, 2013
  • Sold by: Amazon Digital Services, Inc.
  • Language: English
  • ASIN: B00A8Q7B62
  • Text-to-Speech: Enabled
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  • Lending: Enabled
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  • Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #1,220,830 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful By A. Pham on November 27, 2012
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This is a well written book with an interesting story. It wasn't what I expected, but what I got from it was much more. It had all the aspects of a good book. However, there are still lots of problems with it. These are mostly problems with editing and the formatting of the book into an ebook format. It needs more editing to be a smoother read and there were also two scenes with random chunks of missing text.

There was one thing about it that bothered me the most. There was a constant change in perspective, from first-person, second-person, to third-person point-of-views. It should have stayed as one type of narrative, but switches from character to character. There was also weird attempt to integrate an epistolary element into the book as well, which I think, did not make much sense for this type of book. I believe a better effect could have been produced if the author just stuck to one narrative perspective. The author could have stuck to the epistolary style or stuck to one of the narrative POVs.

Overall, it was a great read and I believe, with time, the books that follow will just get better.
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A well written first entry by D.S. Larsell that was obviously put together with a great deal of thought. The story is fairly easy to follow, yet the world the author creates is interesting and invariably makes you want to know more.

I especially like the use of the past to show the reader how the current characters came to be who/what they are. However, I feel the changes in perspectives and style throughout detracts from the flow of the book.

Overall, it was an enjoyable read and I hope to see more from this series.
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By Michael Schilmoeller on April 5, 2013
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I could not put it down. The story carried me along and reflects a maturity of writing found in only the best of today's literature.
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A well crafted vampire story with large sexual undertones, DS Larsell keeps you captivated throughout the journey of several lifetimes.
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Engaging characters, excellent atmosphere. A little loose structurally, but that works with the hallucinogenic quality of the plot. There might be one or two extra elements, but they all fit together and there are just enough loose ends hanging at the end to be interesting
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By Suzan R. Christiansen on February 6, 2013
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I be ame quickly fascinated by the plot and characters. Mr. Larsell has the ability to wrap you up quickly and transport you into a world of vivid sensations. I would be very interested in reading a sequal
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