4.0 out of 5 stars
"Germaine sank to her knees, sobbing, helplessly watching as the ants swarmed...feeling the fire of their millions...of bites", September 18, 2011
********THERE MAY BE MINOR SPOILERS OF PAST NOVELS IN THIS SERIES********
For whatever reason, the town of Blackstone has okayed an extensive renovation of its feared and hated Blackstone Asylum. In this episodic six-part, monthly serialized novel somebody has been seeking vengeance for this defamation of the Asylum. In the first a cursed doll was sent to the developer's family, in the second, a locket was sent to the banker that okayed the loan for the renovation, in the third a lighter ended up in the possession of the Wards. When these gifts show up, the family that receives them always ends up involved in misery, madness, and death. In this book, a beautifully embroidered handkerchief that was created by a schizophrenic patient who would latter hang herself, ends up in the possession of a family whose matriarch once worked for the Asylum, and who may very well have contributed to the death of the young woman.
Oliver Metcalf is the editor and publisher of "The Blackstone Chronicle", the town's weekly newspaper, and he is in love with Rebecca Morrison, the town's assistant librarian. After the death of all of her immediate relatives, and the destruction of her house in "Ashes To Ashes: The Dragon's Flame", Rebecca has been taken in by her boss and the town's librarian, Germaine Wagner. Unfortunately, Germaine is just as bad an abusive person as Rebecca's late, but unmissed Aunt Martha. Germaine wants to destroy any chance of Rebecca having a life with Oliver so that Rebecca can serve as unpaid slave labor for her, and her even more emotionally abusive, and controlling mother.
Meanwhile, Oliver is investigating, badly and reluctantly, the rash of deaths that have suddenly been plaguing Blackstone. As he is investigating some records of the Asylum that he has found in his attic, his father being the last supervisor of the Asylum before it was closed during Oliver's childhood, he finds a beautifully embroidered handkerchief amongst the Asylum's surviving records. Seeing the handkerchief's beauty, and that it has been embroidered with an "R", Oliver decides to give it to Rebecca.
Unfortunately, Germaine in an effort to brownnose and please her bitchy and controlling mother, steals it from Rebecca and gives it her mother, who has a violent reaction to it.
Meanwhile, Oliver has been having increasingly agonizing migraines throughout this series. These migraines have included visions of a young boy being abused and tortured, and now, through the reading of the Asylum's medical records he is also beginning to find out some unpleasant truths about his father, who suicided in 1959.
Also, it looks like the renovation project, which has suffered a long delay due to the death of the previous president and owner of First National Bank Of Blackstone, seems to be back on track. That is if it is okayed by Melissa Holloway, the current president.
And through it all, somebody is watching, and planning, and hating.
Saul amps up the suspense, and mixes up the formula again with this fourth episode as it is becoming clear that all of the mysterious happenings are starting to come to a climax. The main problem so far in these novellas CONTINUES to be the characterization. Everybody is STILL cliché, as if coming from central casting. Oliver is a not-too-bright, not very good investigative reporter, Rebecca is the Pollyannish Jobian character who constantly finds the sunny or positive side of everything, even of her abuse by those that keep taking advantage of her, Germaine and her mother are just by-the-numbers cartoons, etc.
On the other hand, this is an enjoyable pulp thriller for whom the plotting is at least getting better and more interesting, as a main character is either murdered or kidnapped by this episode's ending, leading me to wonder what Saul's going to do in the last two episodes.
For this site I have all six of these volumes in this series:
The Blackstone Chronicles #1:
Eye for an Eye: The Doll (Blackstone Chronicles).
The Blackstone Chronicles #2:
Twist of Fate: The Locket (Blackstone Chronicles).
The Blackstone Chronicles #3:
Ashes to Ashes: The Dragon's Flame (Blackstone Chronicles, Part 3).
The Blackstone Chronicles #4:
In the Shadow of Evil: The Handkerchief (Blackstone Chronicles).
The Blackstone Chronicles #5:
Day of Reckoning: The Stereoscope (Blackstone Chronicles, Part 5).
The Blackstone Chronicles #6:
Asylum (Blackstone Chronicles) (No 6).
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