I tried to like it in the beginning. I really did try.
It had an interesting concept to it, but that's it. A merely interesting concept that COULD have been developed into something more fascinating than another romance with a bit of drama and action in it. While I like how the book dabbled into the finer topics if the supernatural, it could have done more, perhaps bring in other species too, and vary away from the cliche (as with the vampires and their "pan European accent".
The whole book could be expanded upon, and instead of bringing in something new within the middle of the book or last few chapters (Kira's grandmother for example), why not briefly touch upon it in the beginning? Please? It would make the book a better read, and make it seem less like a thirteen year old's perfect fantasy.
The characters are somewhat believable, but honestly they need to be developed more. Honestly, if the characters are 20+, they really ought to act like it. And purple eyes? Obviously, because PLENTY of people walking around us have purple eyes, it's not like it screams SUPERNATURAL or CONTACTS at all.
And these symbols here are called commas: ,
They are very important. Not only that, but so is proofreading and getting someone else to proofread it too.
No wonder it's free.
WOULD NOT RECOMMEND, WASTE OF TIME.