Ships from the West (The Monarchies of God, Book 5) [Paperback]

Paul Kearney (Author)

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Publication Date: December 31, 2002

In the five Ramusian kingdoms, an entire generation has lived in peace. But when old enemies clash, the fate of Normannia will be sealed-once and for all.

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Paul Kearney was born and grew up in Northern Ireland. He lived for some years in Copenhagen, then spent two years in America before returning to Britain in 1998. --This text refers to an out of print or unavailable edition of this title.

Product Details

• Paperback: 320 pages
• Publisher: Ace (December 31, 2002)
• Language: English
• ISBN-10: 0441009298
• ISBN-13: 978-0441009299
• Product Dimensions: 6.8 x 4.2 x 0.9 inches
• Shipping Weight: 4.3 ounces
• Average Customer Review: 4.1 out of 5 stars  See all reviews (10 customer reviews)
• Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #1,303,512 in Books (See Top 100 in Books)

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4 of 4 people found the following review helpful:

3.0 out of 5 stars Series started Great, but Ends Poor!, June 6, 2004

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Daryl Smith (just outside of Dallas, Texas) - See all my reviews
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This review is from: Ships from the West (The Monarchies of God, Book 5) (Paperback)

While I have given this book just 3 stars, the series as a whole probably deserves 4 stars.

The Good (What has gone before)
The story was largely well done up until the last book. Kearney did a great in job building a fairly complex, gritty, largely low-fantasy world. There are many intriguing ideas in this series, some of which are obviously borrowed from medieval European history. Ironically, most fantasy writers all but ignore the subject of religion while creating their pseudo-medieval worlds, even though it is religion that gives real medieval history much of its flavor, both for good and for ill. Kearney, on the other hand, is very successful in integrating a religious atmosphere largely reminiscent of our own Middle-Ages. I found this to be fascinating plot device that worked well.

The Ugly (Mostly this last book!)
This last book takes the wind out of the sales of what was shaping up to be a great fantasy series! Virtually all of the main characters that you have spent the entire series with are systematically killed off in the end. It's not that I have to have some sort of happy fairy-tale type of ending, but many of the characters are abruptly dispatched with hardly a reference. We don't even get to experience King Abeleyn's death, but instead are told of it after the fact. And while we are given slightly more detail about Hawkwood's ignoble passing, it just seemed somehow out of place and inappropriate for the story. I agree with a previous reviewer's assessment that Kearney seemed to be tired of writing. The story feels rushed and fragmented; it skips all over the place leaving many unanswered questions and unfinished plot lines. I also found the closing scene of the book/series to be somewhat cryptic. Instead of putting the book down at its conclusion, and having that sense of satisfaction that comes from finishing a good story, I was left scratching my balding head and trying to figure out what I had just read. Perhaps this is what Kearney was after, something that in the end would leave you puzzling over it. If so, he certainly achieves it.

Conclusion:
If you have read the four previous books you will want to read this one. It does have its moments, for example, we finally get to see Murad get his due. But on the whole, I found this book to be a disappointing conclusion to a potentially great series.

3 of 3 people found the following review helpful:

4.0 out of 5 stars Many unanswered questions!, May 21, 2004

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Kevin Ryan (Ithaca, NY USA) - See all my reviews
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This review is from: Ships from the West (The Monarchies of God, Book 5) (Paperback)

The series as a whole was excellent, but the end seemed far too simple, and left many questions unanswered. I was shocked to discover that this 5th book jumped us many years into the future. Not only this, but the author failed to fill us in on most of what happened during this gap. Also, the author ends up killing the main characters off in mass quantities, and does so in situations that make it seem that the author got tired of writing about them and needed them to go away. For instance, Kearney puts the kings, lords, and military leaders of Astarac and Hebrion on the same boat, and then sinks it. After spending so much time with a character as awesome as Abeleyn, it seems that he was cheated out of a good end. We also say goodbye to countless other characters in similar circumstances.

One of the things I was very sad about was that Bleyn's identity as Hawkwood's son is never revealed, not even to Hawkwood before his death.

The battle at the end of the book also seemed unrealistic. Aruan's mighty army has destroyed the invincible mega-armada of Hebrion and Astarac in less than one night, and yet Corfe is able to do so with a single field army. Aruan has his Flyers attacking his enemy in Charibon, but then does not use them for his own protection when he is attacked by Corfe's small Bodyguard force?

Regardless of what seems to me to be a quick ending written by someone who was tired of writing, the rest of the series is very well put together. The characters had much depth and history to them, and I enjoyed the politics between the kingdoms and such. The last chapter of this book was cryptic and intriguing, and leaves you with a last thought to ponder on.

2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:

3.0 out of 5 stars A too-simplified ending (SPOILERS), August 17, 2003

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This review is from: Ships from the West (The Monarchies of God, Book 5) (Paperback)

There's an eight-year gap between the previous book and this one, the last of the series, and much goes unexplained. Why, for instance, did Bardolin turn over to Aruan -- what exactly happened? We know that Golophin couldn't cure him, and at the end of the last book Bardolin was starting to feel comfortable being a werewolf, but suddenly now he's Aruan's right hand man. How?

And some other small questions: How does Formio come to stay with Corfe permanently? He had been ordered by his commander Barbius to put the Fimbrian troops at Corfe's disposal, but a decade later he's King Corfe's second-in-command. How did he decide to desert his nation? Don't some of those Fimbrians have families? And Jemilla, the woman who struggles so hard to put her son on the throne of Hebrion, somehow marries Murad and stays quiet for a decade? How did people in the Himerian church -- and people in general -- adjust to the sudden change in policy, pro-Dweomer, where before they were burning anyone who used magic?

These are all little questions that add up. It gives me the impression that Mr. Kearney was getting tired of his series and wanted to make everything convenient, without explaining how they got there.

Now, I'm probably nitpicking a bit. The lack of backstory doesn't necessarily detract from the plot, but it does reflect a lack of depth in this world, and gives me less understanding and less reason to care for the people.

The final battle itself, though, feels very cliched. In the beginning, Aruan and his minions wreak a devastating defeat to the huge Hebrian-Astarac navy in the span of mere hours. How could such a magical juggernaut be defeated?

Well, pretty much how you'd expect. Corfe leads an army and somehow finds a way to surprise the enemy, and Aruan's magical army proves surprisingly easy to beat -- with iron or silver. (I find it very hard to believe that no one knew that at the beginning of the book -- no one's heard superstitions or myths about that kind of thing, even though so many people lived side by side with Dweomer-folk not too long ago?) And of course, in the final battle scene, Corfe engages Aruan in single combat and wins. All hail the king.

A cliched, simplified, feel-good ending to a good, complex series. I hoped for better.