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3.0 out of 5 stars
unbelievable dialogue, December 29, 2005
This review is from: Silent Witness (Mass Market Paperback)
i've read mckenna's books for years. she has good plots, but in recent years the male characters just do not "do it" for me. the things they say don't ring true. the word i'd use would be "smarmy". for example, the male character in this book has a heart hardened by divorce. no one has penetrated this hard shell in 2 years. yet within an hour or two the heroine has done just that. the other thing that always bothers me in mckenna's books is that she tends to go overboard with explanations of military terms. two military people will be talking and one will use the initials of a procedure and then right after that he or she will also say the full name of the initials. it would be more believable to leave out the gobbledygook and just have a page at the beginning of the book with a list of the terms so the narration wasn't so wordy.
overall, good plot, poor characterization of the male lead.
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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
A decent storyline, but lacking in the area of presentation, July 7, 2006
This review is from: Silent Witness (Mass Market Paperback)
Silent Witness was an okay book. It had a good point or two, but also a bunch of negatives.
The storyline was pretty interesting. It's very "military", lots of twists and turns. It was a well-thought storyline, easy to follow and it kept me reading. One issue I had with the whole plot though was what I call "author assumption": the author assumes we, as readers, should know something, when we don't. She refers to real-life military scandals of the past simply by name, but doesn't summarize them at all for those of us who don't know them. So I was pretty lost on those references.
As for the romance...I didn't care for it all that much. It wasn't, in a lot of ways, a very romantic book in the standard sense. Up until they end, I think Ellen and Jim share maybe two kisses. There's a sex scene at the end, but it wasn't written that well, and it seemed kind of plopped in there, and ill-fitting.
Aside from that, I just didn't buy into the romance. It was too...pretty. Ellen and Jim are always thinking or saying things like "you're so wonderful", "you bring the sun back into my life" and things like that. It was just too perfect and didn't seem realistic. Added to that, Ellen most of the time seemed to think of Jim as "Cochrane", which just seemed very impersonal.
The characters were very two-dimensional. Almost everything about them, and the book as a whole, was about the plot itself. While, yes, the plot is important, but if you're gonna develop a romance, you're characters need some meat. And it just wasn't there.
Rating: 2.5 / 5
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3.0 out of 5 stars
OK.....but not Great!, March 7, 2010
This review is from: Silent Witness (Mass Market Paperback)
This was definitely NOT a 5 star book. Probably a 2 1/2 or 3. Silent Witness was my first novel by Lindsay McKenna and even though it wasn't great, I will pick up another one by her and give it a try. I found the storyline a little too slow for my taste for the first half of the book. It did pick up toward the end and ended up being interesting. I also found that Ellen and Jim were a little flat and their romance lacking. Jim was a little too "hillbilly" for me. The author should have worked on making her characters a little more believable for the reader. I usually have a hard time parting with a book when I consider it good. In fact, I keep them to reread at a later time. This one is not a keeper, but if you can get it from the library or as a used book, read it.
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