on April 30, 2012
This could be a ferocious satire of the American judiciary, intentionally grotesque and exaggerated. Or it could be what it looks like: an over the top erotic story where everything is exaggerated, beginning with "sizes".
Whatever it is meant to be, it fails: it is not deep enough to bite as a satire and it certainly is not sexy at all.
A strange syntax that rushes clauses one into the other hardly helps.