Customer Reviews

Slow Seduction

5 star:		(4)
4 star:		(1)
3 star:		(3)
2 star:		(1)
1 star:		(2)

 

 

WHAT ELSE CAN I SAY BUT EXCELLENT. I CAN NOT WAIT FOR THE FINAL BOOK TO THIS SERIES.

I liked the characters Clinton and Jenisha, but I found them to be a little weak. Jenisha allowed Clinton to push her around a little too much for my taste, and Clinton became a little annoying because of his jealously and controlling ways. I just wish Jenisha had been up front with Clinton about her condition, however, she did gain a little brownie points later in the book. I don't want to give away the milk without the cow. I did find a lot of grammar errors, but I liked the book.

I really enjoyed the plot of this book and the story line. Although what I didn't like were the sentence errors. I have read a lot of books and I think this book would have been so much better had these errors been corrected. Many times during the reading process I had to make my own mental corrections. This book was full of words being mixed up or extra words being included in a sentence that weren't suppose to be there. I would recommend the book because it was a good story, but just be aware of these errors if you are looking to purchase this book.

This book was great. The characters had real issues and it was fantastic. I liked that it wasn't one of those stories that you could predict from the beginning. Somethings you just know sure, but how they get there was the great part. There were surprises everywhere and I was so happy with this book that I had to get the next one Tempting Turner. I can't wait for it to come in so I can continue this series.

This was a great book, the setting of the book was terrific, I enjoyed this book very much along with the first book of CCD........

I liked the idea of this story. And let's be honest, Clinton was controlling but who doesn't like a Super Alpha male? Powerful heroes are half the reason why we read these books anyway. (Sex is the other half.)

The best way to fully describe this book is to say that it's awkward. It feels choppy and disorganized. The characters didn't seem well developed and the plot was disjointed. For example, I had a hard time believing that Clinton was in love at first sight but then went 15 months just thinking about Jenisha without doing anything about it. It just didn't reconcile with who the character was supposed to be. But then the only way he has to connect with her is through a project that she initiated...? And Robin and Mark were also awkward. I was bored with pretty much everything about their characters and was confused by their misdirected anger and their motivations. Maybe if I read the first one I would have been able to connect the dots around Mark. Maybe.

The ending was definitely thrown together. I won't spoil it, but I finished the climax wondering what just happened. I also have to agree with one of the other reviewers that some of the surrounding story lines seemed unnecessary. I get that the author was trying to set us up for the next installment in the series but it was so apparent that it became more of a distraction than anything.

Did not really like this book, could have left out Mark,his daughter,the couple, unnecessary characters, love scenes were bland.Clinton a bit too jealous. Kept reading thinking it would get better it didnt.

This the second book in the series and it was even better than the first.

I purchased this book with the first one in the series and it is as badly written as the first book. Clearly the author does not have a clue on how to create a story and write it. Once again, Marie Rochelle writes out every single thought the characters have and puts them in quotes because her characters verbalize each and every though they have. What sort of writing is this really?

Do not waste your time or energy with this author or her books. You'd kick yourself for the money and time.

First how does this book qualify as erotic? The COVER IS A LIER!! The author spent more time describing the classroom than a sex scene. I bought this book thinking it was a steamy BWWM book only to be bored and ANGRY over her non existent SEX scenes . Look it usually takes me no more than two days to read a book so on day eight I had to skip a few chapters and get to the point of this long drawn out, never ending, who cares about the plot, non erotic book. The plot was OK but seriously Mrs. Rochelle will not be getting anymore of my money.