10 of 10 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
A Bad Beginning and Weak Plot Detract, December 8, 2001
Having read all of Ashworth's books, I have to say I think this is her worst to date. Not that that makes the book bad, exactly--Ashworth is a good writer, and it shines through; but the beginning is so rough and uninteresting, and the plot is so incredibly weak, that the romance overall seemed a little silly.
The premise is that Professor Nathan Price, at the opening of the Crystal Palace in 1851, is poised to wow the world with his ultra-super megalosaurus jaw bone. A jaw bone. Gosh golly. But when he proudly lifts the velvet draperies to reveal his discovery, there's nothing there! Meanwhile, all the greatest scientists in the world, who have gathered for the event, jump to the logical (?) conclusion, that Professor Price was lying about the whole thing to begin with and there never was a jaw bone. Disgraced, Nathan leaves for the Continent.
Two and a half years later, he's come up with a not-so-brilliant plan to catch the thief who ruined his career by blackmailing Mimi Sinclaire--nee Marsh--into sculpting a reproduction of the jaw bone. Mimi, whose husband conveniently died only two months after they were married, decides life is short and why not seduce the poor sod?
My problems with the plot is this: why do the scientists assume he was making up his discovery of the megalosaurus jaw bone? That would be stupid, not to mention professional suicide. To me the logical assumption would be that it was stolen. Also, I fail to see how constructing a sculpture of the jaw bone would prove to anyone that it actually existed, considering that no one has ever seen it or any other megalosaurus jaw bone. The conclusion of the mystery as to who stole the jaw bone and why also didn't make much sense, although I did guess who the thief was less than fifty pages into the book--it's pretty obvious.
The scenes between Nathan and Mimi are very compelling and hot, but the sheer unbelievabitiy of the plot detracted from the whole novel and made me not like it very much. It's worth checking out, but it's not that great.
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5 of 5 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
This professor's love is reserved for old dinosaur bones., December 27, 2001
I've never liked books with reluctant heroes, and this one is as reluctant as they come. The only emotion displayed by Professor Price--other than his attachment to old dinosaur bones--is the bitterness he feels for being cheated of his greatest triumph the night his precious jawbone disappeared. Well, lust does play a part in it, but no matter what lengths Mimi goes to in her MANY attempts to seduce him, he always seems to be able to resist temptation. Well, almost always.
And that leads to another thing I've always loathed: heroines who chase after reluctant heroes. And this one goes all out, even conspiring with a mutual friend to maneuver him into a situation where he can't refuse. In spite of her provocative manner of dress, "come hither" looks, and constant professions of affection, she refuses to give him the answers he seeks about what happened to his precious jawbone.
Even though I don't care much for this guy as a hero, I can easily understand why he doesn't trust Mimi or her family. I don't trust them either! In fact, the characters of the father and sister are not well drawn; it is not clear why either of them does what they do, or how Mimi could expect the hero to forgive her before actually telling him the truth about what happened.
So, I'd have to say that this book leaves a lot to be desired in a romance novel. But hey, if you're into dinosaur bones and paleontology, this one is right up your alley!
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5 of 6 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Not what I expected!, December 11, 2001
I was so thrilled to get this book and so disappointed when I read it. I think that Adele Ashworth's prior books are some of the finest examples of historical romance, and this book just isn't up to par with them. I found the plot to be tedious and slow while the secondary characters were colorless and uninteresting. The bright spot to this book was the romance between Mimi and Nathan. I loved the way Mimi went after what she wanted so honestly, but it wasn't enough to make me stop yearning for the Adele Ashworth of old.
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