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2.0 out of 5 stars
Tolerable story killed by too many sidebars, March 28, 2010
This review is from: Sons of Dorn (Warhammer 40,000 Novels: Imperial Fists) (Mass Market Paperback)
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Sons of Dorn may has well have been titled Imperial Fists, in homage to Space Wolf, the book that it is basically a portmanteau of. The first half of the book is the identical story of several characters who wish each other dead going through the initiation and initial Space Marine training. In place of the Cup of Wulfen and the icy peaks of the Fang, you have the pain glove and the Phalanx. What makes this rather tragic is how the book could've been rather good, especially given how teetering to the edge several of the characters become.
Through together a few macros on superhuman strength and stamina, a few on how power armor could've stopped X, but scout armor could not, and a few on fighting through pain, and you have about an additional 15% of the text of the book. In addition, SM's are supposed to be superhuman, and this portrayal paints them as the pinnacle of human, but only just. I prefer the comparison of a punch from me could snap your spine to I'm only slightly better than you. The enemies taken on in this volume, despite being amped up, should've still been felled like sheep at the slaughter, as that's what SM's do.
Overall, a mediocre plot foiled by making it something that you've clearly seen before, and while this seemed to be one of the few moments where the Imps can claim a clear and decisive victory, priceless jewels for their rarity, it sure did not have the feel of a win. The tension and animosity that seemed like it would be a driving force of the story sputters and dies, with no apparent cause or reason for its departure. Read Space Wolf instead, better plot with better character closure.
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7 of 9 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
Not even good for pulp fiction..., January 2, 2010
This review is from: Sons of Dorn (Warhammer 40,000 Novels: Imperial Fists) (Mass Market Paperback)
I picked up this book thinking that I had read this author before, unfortunately I realized soon enough that I had been thinking of Anthony Reynolds (who is actually quite good) and that this author was too be avoided in the future.
The story started off decently enough, but soon was bogged down in the unbelievable rivalry between the three main characters. The circumstances of their anger at each other were forced and then the rest of the novel the reader is left to deal with the random outbursts of anger whenever the author decided you needed to be absolutely sure they hated one another.
I am not sure why the other review says you get to see the training of space marines. You really don't, aside from a brief window into the pain fetish of the Imperial Fists. The initiates go from being winnowed through tasks the reader does not see to 4-5 years in the future when they are scouts. There is one training scene as scouts, then they are in the battle.
In the end, there are plenty of better 40k books out there, avoid this one.
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11 of 15 people found the following review helpful:
1.0 out of 5 stars
Sons of Yawn, February 12, 2010
This review is from: Sons of Dorn (Warhammer 40,000 Novels: Imperial Fists) (Mass Market Paperback)
I enjoyed Ian Watson's Space Marine so I can dig this author's enthusiasm for pursuing a similar vein in Sons of Dorn. But it felt to me like a rehash (and a poor one at that). This novel is just 40K by the numbers: mention important Imperial Fists personalities like Vladimir Pugh, Darnath Lysander, and Rhetoricus (worst_name_ever) without fleshing out any character details (TICK); repeat ad nauseum that "no mortal man could take that kind of damage but (our protagonist) could because HE'S A SPACE MARINE!" (TICK); don't forget the nerve glove - no decent Imperial Fists novel can do without it (TICK). Honestly, Black Library authors/ editors have got to stop treating the 40K literary audience like bozos. I don't want to know about the Laraman's gland again - you've already explained it, along with every other Black Library author in current rotation. Yes, I do realise that scout armour is not the same as Astartes armour, so stop wasting my time with yet another comparison and get on with the story! This book is typical of the Black Library's recent approach towards their novels - assume the audience knows nothing about the WH40K universe and fill 'em in. It's distracting and it's a shame because the lore, not the story, often becomes the focus of the novel: disjointed and boring for the umpteenth time. If you doubt my words read some earlier 40K novels for a comparison. In fact, give Watson's Space Marine a go. Far, far superior to this watered-down rendition. Look also for books by earlier Black Library authors like Gordon Rennie, Brian Craig and Barrington J Bayley. Their stories are interesting, have direction and purpose and characters, good and evil, you'll want to return to time and again. If you enjoy a decent read, give Sons of Dorn a miss.
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