7 of 8 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
I loved it!, September 4, 2003
This review is from: Stone Garden: A Novel (Hardcover)
This is a fascinating, insightful story set in a high school where a young man has disappeared. But don't let the high school setting fool you, this book is readable for everyone. Moynahan does a terrific job of building her characters and they walk off the pages into your heart. I cared about Alice and her family and wanted them to be happy. The reader watches Alice's transformation from a spoiled high school kid to a young woman. This will make you think about grief, happiness and family love and will make you laugh! I finished the book immediately handed to a friend and said "Read this! You'll love it." I will also be recommending it to my book club.
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9 of 11 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
overripe, cliche-ridden and banal treatment of loss, March 11, 2004
This review is from: Stone Garden: A Novel (Hardcover)
Towards the conclusion of Molly Moynihan's cloying and manipulative novel "Stone Garden," her angst-ridden protagonist laments, "How sad to be without a soul." That one sentence neatly encapsulates the essence of Moynihan's writing, soulless. Under the pretense of examining the devastating impact of unexpected death on sensitive adolescents, Moynihan manages to include every conceivable plot contrivance, cardboard characterization and tear-saturated sigh she can muster. The result is a dreary, unbelievable story that achieves the worst possible result: readers who lack sympathy for her protagonist and who could care less about the anguish the protagonist presumably feels.
Alice McGuire attends a quasi-private progressive high school in suburban New Jersey. Her classmates, when not busy on cold fusion physics projects, chumming around with budding rap stars, sojourning in Europe or writing operas, aren't so much late teens but weary, jaded adults pretending to be younger. Wise, but stupid beyond her years, Alice mourns the loss of her one-true-love, Matthew Swan, a seemingly perfect young man who just happens to die in Mexico while accompanying a bereft female "friend" who needed his comfort while scoring drugs. Why Matthew would travel thousands of miles with a girl whom he barely knows while leaving his heartthrob Alice behind defies logic, but, as much else in "Stone Garden," believability has long before checked out.
There is not one character who is credible. Not Alice's father, whose goofy laid-back acquiescence is atonement for his adulterous affair with Matthew's drug-addicted mother. Not the earnest and oh-so-wonderful lesbian teacher, Ms. Hardwood, who, in addition to falling in love with the village blacksmith (yes, there is still a village blacksmith...), carries her own long-lost heterosexual lover in her memory. Not in the long-suffering Sigrid, who witnessed the murder of her babysitter by a criminal who coincidentally is inovlved in a prison writing project assisted by, naturally, Alice.
Molly Moynahan should know better. As a teacher, she knows that teens are more complex than the young men and women she presents. As a capable writer, she knows that readers deserve genuine conflict and realistic dialogue. Regardless of age, unexpected death engenders complicated, volatile and unpredictable responses from the living. "Stone Garden" betrays the possibilities of this terrible circumstance, instead preferring overripe, implausible commentary. In this sense, Moynahan's novel is false and fraudulent.
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2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
3.0 out of 5 stars
Enjoyable - not a great book, but a good story, February 11, 2004
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This review is from: Stone Garden: A Novel (Hardcover)
Ms Moynahan's novel made me laugh, cry, and remember my own first teenage love. As other reviews have alluded, the story is a bit fantastic, with unrealistic twists and turns. But it's a novel, a story, and authors are allowed to play around with reality. Do her characters have depth? Yes. Does she describe her locales well enough that I get a sense of place? Yes. Does the plot keep me intrigued and reading? Yes. Is her prose occasionally melodramatic and at times over-the-top? Yes, but so is life.
I laughed as she described the cliques and the classrooms. I wondered at how nonchalant her characters feel towards sex. But I enjoyed her book for what it is, a good story. I was taken away from my daily routine into a world different from my own, and glad for the minivacation.
Is it great literature? No. Did it make me feel something? Yes. So, I recommend it as good girly fluff to wallow in on a cold winter afternoon.
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