3.0 out of 5 stars
pretty good mystery with some faults Ill go into., May 11, 2010
This review is from: Stranger Room (Ike Schwartz Mystery) (Paperback)
Im going backwards in this series. I started with Ramsay's book 'Choker'. Both 'Choker' and 'Stranger Room' have the same flaws and the same strengths in my mind.
First, Ramsay has a few story lines going on here. I didn't feel like any of them were explored to the extent that would have made them satisfying. Though Ramsay does an adequate job of telling them, the struggle to unearth the mysteries here are not very challenging. They all sort of unfold without passion.
The book gets its name from the primary mystery. If you have read a lot of old Agatha Christie books along with her contemporaries, you will have come across the locked room mystery. Every author of that period seemingly had to write at least one. This one has a very 2 dimensional old family with a 100% despicable old man who hates every one as the primary suspect.
The second mystery deals with an old deputy from the police force that Ike has taken over. That deputy is intent on taking control of the town again and Ramsay manages to get in a few altercations before ending things quickly. Nothing original here.
The third mystery isn't really a mystery but a couple of short asides that deal with Ike and his lady friend & other short episodes involving the deputies on the force.
I would give the stories here 1 star. They are pretty bad and unfold with no passion from the author.
The second thing I did not like at all was the multiple first person's here. I think the book must have jumped into the mind of a dozen characters. All of them were very very very similar. The only time they were at all different was when Ramsay would make a caricature of a character like with the prime suspect of the locked room mystery here.
Its obvious Ramsay wants to have a huge rambling soap opera style series of books that explores the lives of the townsfolk. I applaud the effort. Ed McBain did this with his 87th Precinct series perfectly. Ramsay should take a few notes.
Why I am giving this book 3 stars instead of 1 and gave 'choker' 4 stars instead of 1, Ramsay has a gift as a writer. His prose slides painlessly off of the page. Its a pleasure to read. If only his stories were up to his writing...
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5.0 out of 5 stars
Historical knowledge takes a dangerous turn in this gripping mystery, December 12, 2008
Elder Jonathan Lydell III is proud of his Southern history connections - connections which don't seem to matter to the current generation. Nearly 150 years an unexplained murder took place inside the Lydell's locked stranger room - and the murderer was never caught. When an identical murder is committed in the newly restored room, historical knowledge takes a dangerous turn in this gripping mystery.
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5.0 out of 5 stars
fabulous investigative tale, August 17, 2008
In 1864, The Staunton Spectator newspaper reported that a traveler Mister Franklin Brian was found murdered in the stranger room attached to the Bolton home of Captain Jonathan Lydell, Now a century and half later, elderly Jonathan Lydell IV informs the local sheriff department that someone murdered guest Anton Grotz in his restored antebellum mansion's stranger room with the key inside sealing shut the room.
Picketsville, Virginia Sheriff Ike Schwartz with the able help of FBI loaner acting deputy Karl Hendrick investigates the apparent modern day locked room homicide; they find a connection to the cold case Civil War era killing and eerily Poe. As they dig deeper while working other crimes, Jonathan displays his outrage that the cops are turning his estate into a crime scene as he overtly displays his racism and his superiority, but fails to deter Ike or Karl from performing their job.
Using the STRANGER ROOM historical concept of a place attached yet totally separated from a house as the basis for a contemporary locked room police procedural, Frederick Ramsay provides a fabulous investigative tale. The story line is fast-paced from the moment Jonathan and his bed and breakfast employee Mrs. Antonelli fail to rouse the guest and never slows down. The cast is solid especially the "Old Virginian" Jonathan with his don't call me Jon instead call me Mr. attitude. Fans will appreciate this strong regional police procedural (see SECRETS and BUFFALO MOUNTAIN for Ike's previous Virginia cases).
Harriet Klausner
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