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4 of 5 people found the following review helpful
5.0 out of 5 stars intense and real
with a family to feed and mortgage payments to meet, Mike settles for "casual labor" at Celestial Farms. for Mike, the working conditions are not that bad but the job requirements are - preparing and slaughtering prime live turkeys.
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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful
3.0 out of 5 stars Enjoyed this book
Book was an ok read. Like the forensic information...interesting read..my daughter recommended this book series to me. Will probably read rest of series.
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4 of 5 people found the following review helpful
5.0 out of 5 stars intense and real, February 15, 2012
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with a family to feed and mortgage payments to meet, Mike settles for "casual labor" at Celestial Farms. for Mike, the working conditions are not that bad but the job requirements are - preparing and slaughtering prime live turkeys.
the term Sub-Prime refers to loans or mortgages supplied to those with lower credit ratings. according to Yahoo Answers, Sub-Prime could also mean stay away, corrupt, better luck next time, a sucker's born every minute and clean up your act.
i find these other definitions interesting because they aptly describe Mike, the factory and the people he meets there.
although the story is short, it is well-written, quite intense and very realistic. it deals with the human condition, the choices one makes and how far an unemployed person would go to survive.
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3.0 out of 5 stars Enjoyed this book, February 5, 2013
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Book was an ok read. Like the forensic information...interesting read..my daughter recommended this book series to me. Will probably read rest of series.
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4.0 out of 5 stars Four stars, September 4, 2012
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A well written little tale. Serves to remind that under the right circumstances people will do anything and that no matter how low you think you've gone there is always someone worse off.
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5.0 out of 5 stars Humanity in Crisis, May 28, 2012
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Emma Calin's short story, Sub-Prime, has equal shades of the bleak economic times found in both the past and present day. Her lead character, Mike, is a man reduced to a place of destitution after being unemployed for two months. In order to provide for his family, he must take a job slaughtering turkeys at Celestial Farms. Here he meets a poverty-stricken young woman. These contrasting characters present a contradiction in appearance and internal fortitude. The working conditions and sociology in this story have shades of works by Charles Dickens and Hannah Tinti, except they are set during present day. The spark of a reciprocal connection lending support between two people in dire straits is endearing. The language barrier between them shows loving hearts need no words. This five star short story leaves you wanting it to continue.
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5.0 out of 5 stars A dark tale of Christmas, May 11, 2012
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It's been a long time since I found a short story worthy of mention. That's sad. I always loved them. O'Henry. L'Amour. Thurber. There were so many greats who used the medium so well. Emma Calin joins those illustrious ranks with Sub-Prime. She also obligates herself to us now to provide a collection of them. Sub-Prime is a Christmas story that that could become a classic of its genre. It tells the sad tale of a man at the end of his rope, out of work and out of money, trying to provide for his family during the holiday season. There is little hope in this story which is somehow appropriate in these dark economic times in which we live.
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5.0 out of 5 stars Spontaneous Combustion Likely, May 11, 2012
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When Mike loses his job, and can't find another after long searching, he swallows his pride and goes to work in one of those "farms" where turkeys are slaughtered and plucked. It's a big comedown, especially when this big strong man discovers he is unable to kill a bird. "The neck was warm and living. He could feel its pulse as if it were his baby son."

Mike gets help from a Roma waif working alongside him at the plant. This plain girl, who speaks almost no English, does his killing for him while Mike takes over most of the plucking. They have an unspoken contract, as Mike sees it.

Mike embarks on a curious mental journey in this single week of day labor, with this innocent yet highly suggestive relationship with a co-worker and with his gradual transformation into a killer. There is the intimation that darker things lurk beneath the surface, and all these elements threaten to combust at any moment in this intricate and beautiful story.
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5.0 out of 5 stars a slaughter of love, May 10, 2012
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Emma Calin's Sub-Prime is a haunting short story about the compromises people make for even an uncertain love. Calin takes a grotesque setting and mines beautiful diamonds from it. I would love to see Calin apply her formidable literary gifts to a full length novel that uses this story as its centerpiece.

It only takes twenty minutes or so to read the entire piece. I guarantee the reader will find the time spent on this story well-worth the effort.

Highly recommended.
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5.0 out of 5 stars Good book, May 5, 2012
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I love books and enjoyed this one. It has become part of my research as I one day hope to write a book. Great context and loved the way the words flowed.
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4.0 out of 5 stars Conditions of life, February 26, 2012
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"Sub-prime" by Emma Calin is a short story of working an unbearable job that unemployed Mike takes to try to support his family and the mounting bills the are becoming very oprressive. The story speaks of the humanity and realities of life and survival.
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3 of 4 people found the following review helpful
5.0 out of 5 stars Emma Calin, January 27, 2012
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Emma Calin is one of the finest authors plying the ancient trade. I make that statement for three reasons: First, because she has been there. Second, because she is willing to share what she has seen, heard, and learned. Third, because she is an amazing wordsmith.
Writing without experience is akin to walking into total darkness without a light. Sub-Prime is not a fun tale, but it's truth, and truth, even well stated, is stark, in-your-face, and eye opening. If you have the courage to read Sub-Prime you are going to experience truth told with an eloquence that is difficult to find today.
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