28 of 31 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
A solid first try, considering, but..., May 2, 2007
First off, even though I am an adult (or as close to one as I'll ever be), I read a great deal of children's fiction and enjoy reading it, so I'm not necessarily looking for the same type of depth and complexity that an average adult would expect from fiction.
That said, I had to force myself to finish reading this one; it kept losing my interest no matter how often I came back to it. With so many people at the publisher apparently involved in this book, I'm surprised that no one was able to help the author smooth out the dialogue, for one thing. As much as I wanted to like the characters, they felt like Redwall extras, and I'm sorry to say that I never really found myself caring what happened to them. The story's style and structure also felt like Redwall retreads.
I can understand that allowances have to be made for young authors, and this author is, of course, highly gifted for her age. But the fact remains that, if it were not for the "hook" of the author's age, I don't think this book would have gotten published, especially not by a major publisher, and if you're going to read the book solely for its own merits, you'll wind up being disappointed. (I can see, however, that it would be a great inspiration to other young writers.)
The one thing I really loved about this book were the detailed pencil illustrations of the birds -- remarkably realistic and yet with their own personalities. I wish they hadn't started repeating, though; I would have liked to see more.
Overall, I'm looking forward to seeing what this author will do in several more years, as her skills catch up with her talent.
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11 of 13 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
Disappointing, December 26, 2007
A Kid's Review
I was quite surprised when I read an article in a magazine about this book that was being released soon, and was written by a 12 year-old author. Next time I was at the bookstore, I picked up a copy, eager to see how well people around my age could write, and get published. As soon as I began to read, I noticed that the book didn't flow quite as smoothly as good a book should. Unlike most books of the same genre that I've read, Swordbird was almost difficult to continue reading due to a cliche plot and cast of characters. I was continually reminded of the Redwall series by Brian Jacques, with the great banquets of food, the evil tyrant constructing a fortress, and the peace-loving protagonists. Swordbird even mentions a tapestry of the great warrior, Swordbird, just like Redwall's tapestry of Martin the Warrior. And while Swordbird did contain some vivid sensory descriptions, they appeared infrequently. The plot of the story itself was not extremely complex or deep in meaning. Parts of the book were also akward and even childish and didn't quite fit in with the rest. I do congratulate this young author on her determination and persistence in writing the book and having it published, but it fell short of my expectations.
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5 of 5 people found the following review helpful:
1.0 out of 5 stars
Not worth reading unless your under twelve., January 27, 2009
I'll try to be breif, because all in all, I did not like this book.
Throughout the book I continually lost focus because it was an overall dull book. In fact, I quickly found that I couldn't care less about the outcome of the book by the time I reached the end of chapter one. This, however, I could make myself overcome and so I finished it. But then I reached the end, if you could call it that. I was definately dissappointed. The story just stopped. Throughout the entire book there was what I figure was meant to be a complex fight between good and evil, but then suddenly, evil was defeated and the story ended.
I just find that after finishing the book, I wish I hadn't wasted the time.
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