Customer Reviews

Tainted Purity

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This story needs massive amounts of editing for basics like plot continuity, characterization,dialogue, etc. You name it -- it needs fixin'. Take it off the market, fix it up -- clarify the premise; make the characters and plot believable; construct some form of internal logic for the plot and for the heroine's propensity for cursing a blue streak. Then, and only then, put it back on the market. It has the potential to be an exciting story, but it's still too raw, too amateurish. In spite of the weakness of this story, I will probably look into other works by this author.

Although this was a erotic book, this was too much of a good thing. Some of it was over kill. This was my first erotia, but I felt it could have been better written. Sorry

There are too many books from this publisher which are simply unreadable. Tainted Purity reads like a first draft and we need at least 3 more to go. It was so badly written it kept jerking me out of the world of the book, to start rearrange sentences, fix grammatical errors, delete repetitions. It got so distracting, that I stopped reading. Sigh.

Underneath all the errors and weirdness there was some semblance of a story but not enough to hold me through the badly written dross.

This goes back to the reswap pile. I couldn't even finish it. :(

THE BOOK WAS RECEIVED QUICKLY AND WAS IN CONDITION STATED. I WOULD USE THIS VENDOR AGAIN.

THANKS.