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The Alpha Challenge [Kindle Edition]

Trisha Hinchliffe
3.9 out of 5 stars  See all reviews (47 customer reviews)

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Book Description

Jina was a half wolf shifter - except that she couldn’t shift. She fled the safety of her pack after the death of her father – except the pack was no longer safe for her. She wanted to make a new life on her own although lone wolves never survived long when away from the pack. Life was going to be a big challenge but when she finally landed a job and met her true mate, the real challenge was to begin. Would she be able to spend her life with her true mate or would an Alpha challenge set her future down a road she never wanted to take.


Product Details

  • File Size: 586 KB
  • Print Length: 109 pages
  • Publisher: Trisha Hinchliffe; 2 edition (August 13, 2013)
  • Sold by: Amazon Digital Services, Inc.
  • Language: English
  • ASIN: B00EJW42X6
  • Text-to-Speech: Enabled
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  • Lending: Enabled
  • Amazon Best Sellers Rank: #145,699 Paid in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Paid in Kindle Store)
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21 of 22 people found the following review helpful
2.0 out of 5 stars editing! September 3, 2013
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I liked the basic story, but the “gazillion” typos and grammar errors made it necessary to stop and decipher what was going on and who was speaking. Many paragraphs switched between points of view making it difficult to follow who was saying or thinking what and I felt the characters and their situations lacked development.

I believe if this author would develop a timeline to follow for her story it would have read far better than it did. The prologue of the main character’s mother speaking to her as a child doesn’t have a point were the story is concerned and could have been used to explain why she left her pack or how she came to be in her current situation. Additionally, she is wondering why things aren’t progressing as if significant time has passed when at the same time the author tells you she is coming up to her first weekend off—ergo she just met the guy five days ago.

We are to believe this woman is a survivor of extreme abuse and neglect while at the same time we are to believe she is an alpha female capable of single handedly whipping an alpha male and her response to the out-of-line drunk was so out of proportion to the situation. No one who experienced such poor treatment and who was supposedly smart would go around announcing to everyone that she has a fortune either.

Finally, no explanation for pack alpha Alex’s attitude and behavior was given; however, after our main character makes a public display of rudeness back at him, he suddenly welcomes her with open arms and changed attitude? When did our hero say he didn’t want to be pack alpha? What happened to the former alpha's bad guys, did they also just suddenly change? This story will leave you wondering and full of questions.
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4 of 4 people found the following review helpful
1.0 out of 5 stars Like pulling teeth December 11, 2013
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I tried, but couldn't finish. Reading this felt like pulling teeth; I've read textbooks that were less painful. It feels forced and the characters feel shallow and fake. There are zero conversations that are natural between the characters. I wanted to feel bad for the main character, but she was so undeveloped that I couldn't find any empathy or sympathy for her. Would not recommend to anyone.
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2 of 2 people found the following review helpful
2.0 out of 5 stars Not that great September 11, 2013
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First off the spelling errors were atrocious then there was the lack of defining on who was speaking what. It made my head hurt there was also misnamed characters in many scenes that drove me nuts. I believe that the author needs to redo this story and get it edited before re releasing it to the public. The only thing good about it in my opinion was that it was free.
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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful
3.0 out of 5 stars A book with potential but editing required. September 27, 2013
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This is a nice book, an entertaining werewolf romance with a very independent and proactive heroine with a sweet male hero that acts as alpha when needed but not in their relationship...
but I have to agree with many of the other reviewers: The problem is the writing..too many tipping mistakes, errors in the names .. disconnected and repetitive paragraphs turns the story in something very distracting to be read..
Still, the storyline was fun ( got me smiling in several points ), all the flirting between Matt and Jina and the secondary characters are great too. This is one of those stories where you have happy endings for everyone so it is a very good choice for those dates when you want a comforting read.
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3 of 4 people found the following review helpful
4.0 out of 5 stars Going forward September 11, 2013
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I enjoyed this story, it was a good story from beginning to end.
In saying this, the author really needs a good editor to critique the story. Yes, there were some errors but it wasn't as bad as some said. Also I noticed the author abbreviated which should never be done in a story, that should only be used in text msg only. I think the author is from England or something because of the slang she used which did not make the story confusing just different.
The reason I gave it a 4 instead of a 5 is because of the errors.
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2 of 3 people found the following review helpful
2.0 out of 5 stars i wanted to like it; i really did. September 12, 2013
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I liked the premise of this story and I enjoyed the characters and the first chapters drew me in. And then about 1/2 way through, the story lost my interest. It seemed that once she met her mate, the story went downhill. I get that we're all reading these types of books for the happy ending, but this started to read as if a teenager had written it. After a childhood of horrendous abuse, there has to be some effect on her personality. In this book - nope; none. Oh, except that she's rich and gives her mate a check for $100K to finish his house and wonderful alpha that he is doesn't even squawk. I guess my end summation is that this book reads as if someone got tired of writing it or realized that the story they had planned would take to long, so they decided to gloss over the scenes.

Then we have the misspellings, incorrect word usage. Please get an editor.

Oh, and don't get me started on the British slang that is sometimes used, but not always.

I would not recommend this book.
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4.0 out of 5 stars Family at last February 26, 2015
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Jina has had a very rough life since the death of her mother. Thankfully her mother was not ruled by her love for Josh, Jina's father. Upon her death she left Jina the funds to look after herself and live a fulfilling life. The only thing Jina can't do is shift, due to her mother being human, hence the reason Josh would not claim her as his daughter.
By leaving her pack she is able to grow and seek a life she wants. She meets Matt who is a very nice man and treats her with respect. She is drawn to him but not sure why.
Matt sees Jina and senses she is his mate. When Nina explains to him why she left her pack, Matt finds out that Jina can not shift. He accepts her none the less and Jina believes things will be ok.
Matt's brother Alex is alpha to the pack and has proposed to make an alliance with Jina's old pack. Jina now worries that old problems will arise when they visit her old pack.
A good shifter read with a twist not seen before.
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Most Recent Customer Reviews
5.0 out of 5 stars Fun Story
This was a fun story to read. Great sex and action scenes that get you really into the events.

Loved the ending as it was very satisfying. I do so love a HE A.
Published 1 day ago by Mary Roya
3.0 out of 5 stars good story but
This was a good story but needed better editing. There were several misspellings and some sentences were strangely written, uncommon arrangement of words.
Published 6 days ago by Nikki Bailey
5.0 out of 5 stars Good Read
This was a short read. But it was a good story! I give this book a thumbs up! Thanks to the author
Published 3 months ago by Stang
3.0 out of 5 stars a bit simplistic
As stories go it wasn't too bad. A little too simplistic and tired. A story that has been told many times before just by different authors.
Published 3 months ago by Amazon Customer
4.0 out of 5 stars Four Stars
Liked it
Published 6 months ago by Amazon Customer
4.0 out of 5 stars It was a good read
The story was okay, kinda cheesy in a way. I liked that it went at a good pace and no over describing of trees and every little detail. All in all it was a good read.
Published 7 months ago by Book worm
5.0 out of 5 stars Exciting fun
An exciting and fun read. Hot romance and hot action. If you are looking for a semi-short fun read look no further for in this book you have found it! Read more
Published 10 months ago by Kenneth D. Johns
5.0 out of 5 stars Absolutely Amazing
Great story awesome plot with an even better ending. I will be looking forward to reading more books from Ms. Trisha Hinchliffe.
Published 13 months ago by Keisha
1.0 out of 5 stars Editing required
The characters names were used interchangeably. Run on sentences and bad punctuation. The ending was wrapped up neatly with a happily ever after.
Published 13 months ago by Teresa
4.0 out of 5 stars Loved the book but needs editing!
I really enjoyed this book and thought the author wrapped the story up beautifully. The editing was a deterrent. Read more
Published 13 months ago by Michelle Greene
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