Top positive review
Good story, needs tweaking, but worth the read
on November 25, 2012
It's obviously a beginning work since I can't find anything else out about the author, but it was a good story. I loved the characters and the whirlwind romance is believable. Like others have said, the whole... SPOILER ALERT.................... pregnancy thing is a little hard to get over, I figured it out too quickly, but the characters were a little slow. I did not like the ending. The epilogue occured later in the day as the previous chapter, so there was no happy ending in the future, all you know is what happens at the end of the day and there is so much that is left up in the air. I assume this is because she plans to write another book and there is plenty of material that can fill that book, but there is no mention of it anywhere. I really liked the characters and want to see where their story leads.